I ENGRAVED YOU IN ME ( BL )
The deserted lake park appeared very much familiar to him, though he was new to the city. Richard was standing on a wet green patch of land and staring deeply at the lake. A sort of uneasiness appeared in him. A boomed noise from the clock tower indicating noon which was near him made his heart weak. Elegant trees covered with eye-catching autumn leaves began to lose temper and started waving at him aggressively. The sky which was as smooth as velvet cloak turned dark. A vague image appeared in front of Richard, which sent chills down his spine. A voice appeared "Richard, will you let me be your moon?". After hearing this sentence he could not able to stand the unpleasant state, suddenly he lost his consciousness. "RICHARD.....wake up. RICHARD........".
Richard and Fredrick are young adults who are studying at the same University. They both left their city to study at the university which was away from their city. But they never knew what they gonna face there. They faced lots of strange things right from day one.
Wait !!! strange things?? Yeah, they need to untangle the mystery to know the truth. will they be successful enough to find the truth about them?
**STORY MIGHT BE CONFUSING IN THE MIDDLE BUT YOU WILL GET IT CLEAR CHAPTER BY CHAPTER**
AUTHOR'S SHAMELESS REVIEW ...... Thank you guys for your reviews . I will keep updating my chapters regularly if possible . If not please forgive me . Do comment your thoughts and correct my work if you find any mistakes . THANKYOU ....
Releasing new chapters soon ....Sorry for the delay. I think I will release 8 chapters in one go . Do enjoy that . THANK YOU ....... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp]
A colourful cast is certainly a welcome addition to any novel, and in 'I ENGRAVED YOU ME', you're certainly getting a kaleidoscope of characters. I'm looking forward to see how the remainder of the cast interact!
The story is nicely written and the theme is good too but it's a little confusing at some parts and there are some grammatical errors too. But I know you will fix them soon and yeah I hope you do frequent updates. 3.8 might seems bad but it's a honest review~ so please don't feel bad about it and try harder. All the best Author
An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power! <3
Thank you ☺️ for your reviews. I will be adding new chapters. Sorry for the delay.......................................................... 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Your story is really good. Characters are described very well.Do update regularly. Nice keep it up..........................................................................................................................
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Overall It's good and interesting. Must try! [img=recommend] Characters are beautifully described. Author has done a great job writing this book. This will help in everyone's reading and speaking skills as well.
I like the plot and the starting lines of the novel. The writer is creative and done her research, but the writing style is actually revealing the whole story of reincarnation. The same wonderful plot you are planning to write can be made more intriguing. In the same way, if the characters are explained during the plot, it would add suspense element too. This is just my opinion and a author to author suggestion😊 I am giving five stars as an encouragement. Keep Going!!
The plot and the characters' backgrounds were relatively okay. There were just some problems with the transition of scenarios, misuses of punctuation marks, and quite a number of grammatical errors. I hope the author would mind giving a little more details so that it won't be confusing.
It's good to read the chapter and the character has been described perfectly in the first chapter. Don't confuse the timeline work pls except that everything was nice
Greatly detailed ...........................................................................................................................................................
I love the way the characters are thoughtfully discribed. The different timelines make the story very interesting, although you make sure it won't become confusing to readers. I think the Author has done a great job and with some editing I think this book can atract a lot of readers.
I like your plot . You have described the characters in detail . Story has lots of potential . Your cover page is also attractive . Really a good work . All the best for your future work ☺️ .