Too Unlucky

A group of seven ( six boys named John, Drew, Sérgio, Smith, Paul, Sander and a girl named Sonya) friends goes for a tour, before reaching their destination, they saw an old woman coming towards them, she was trying to tell them something about the place but they ignored her and insisted on going.

They reached there destination at night where by they sat in circle and lit a fire in between. They were having fun and making stories.

So Paul felt a lil' nasty and went for a piss. Reaching there, he took a piss and then turned around to go back to his friends, something hit him hard at the back of his head and he fell down, a fierce, scary, ugly man who walks slowly pulling a huge axe with him. So this scary man took his axe from Paul's head and went.

So four of his(Paul) friends slept and the two were making stories (Drew and Smith) and suddenly Drew asked, "Where is Paul?", And Smith replied, "He went for a piss about an hour ago." Drew added, "You think he's alright?", And Smith, "Let's go check on him."

The two got up and went to check on their friend, reaching there, they saw Paul lying on his belly, having a big wound at the back of his head. So these two rushed and told the four whom were sleeping about it and they all got up and went to see the dead body and then all of them felt sad and went back where they lit the fire.

Sander said, "You know what guys!",(Everyone was looking at him) he then added, "We can't stay here, we have to move forward because if we stay here, we'll end like Paul."

John replied, "No, we can't move forward."

Sander asked, "Why?", He then added, "it's too dangerous because we don't know this place." And then Sander got angry and said, "You stay here if you want because I can't stay here." He angrily started going but Sonya stopped him. All the entire talk was being watched and heard by the fierce man.

So John told the rest of the guys to have a sleep and he'll be awake and the guys slept.

It was morning already and the guys were having breakfast which they brought in their bag, but John didn't take it. They sat down and suddenly John stood up and said,"Guys, let's move." The guys became confused and didn't know what was going on.

Smith asked,"Why what's going on?" And then John, "I said let's move!".(All of them stood up and were moving.)

On their way moving, Sonya was playing with Drew and then she(Sonya) knocked her leg on a stone and fell down. While she was down, she a well and shouted, "Water!!", And then she stood up and was running towards it and the rest of the guys ran to drink water but Smith said, "I'll wait for you guys right here, I'm not thirsty."(the distance between Smith and the guys was about 16 metres away from each other)

So Smith heard something, he turned his head around and looked behind, he ignored. He heard it again and turned around and was moving towards it.

Sonya asked, "Where's Smith going?"(All the other guys were watching him).

So he reached closer to the bush and he was suddenly pulled into the bush and the other guys ran to save their friend. The guys reached and entered the bush and Smith was nowhere to be seen. They tried looking for him but they couldn't find him and then suddenly, a droplet of blood dropped on Drew's nose from up and then he moves his eyes up to see, he saw Smith was hanged up on a tree with his body covered in blood and then he(Drew) shouted so loud, all the other guys looked at him, he pointed his finger up and the guys saw Smith's dead body hanged up.

The guys went under a big tree and were mourning Smith's death. They all say down and then Drew stood up and was blaming John, "it's all your fault, you made us to move." And then Sonya stood up and calmed him down.

They sat under the tree till it was night already. Sérgio realized that he left his phone at the well where they drank water earlier and was going to pick it and then Sonya said, "No, it's too dangerous.", "Don't worry I'll be okay", said Sérgio.

He then went to the well, after about five minutes, the guys(John, Sonya, Drew and Sander) heard a scream of Sérgio's voice, they ran to check what happened. Reaching there, they saw Sérgio was dead.

The remaining four guys were mourning the death of two lovely friends and then suddenly Sander got up and said, I'm going, I don't wanna die." He then started going and it was hard to stop him so the guys let him go.

He was going via the bush and then got tired and sat under a tree to take a rest, before closing his eyes, he saw too legs standing in front of him. He slowly moved his eyes up and he saw the fierce man with his huge axe, he then screamed, "Johhnn!!!" And the guys stood up and ran towards the screamed voice, reaching there, they found Sander, they ran and asked him, "What happened?" And Sander kept quiet. Drew asked again, "What happened!, And John said maybe he's not alright." John added, "Let's move."

Drew became very suspicious of Sander from there.

So as the guys moved, they reached a two way road( left and right). The other three said, "let's move right." But Sander said, "No, it's left." And he led them through the left. They reached an open trapped place and Sander was behind them. So John asked, "Where have you brought us?", Sander smiled and then Drew placed his hands on Sander's collar and said, "You know something, tell us now!", "I don't know", said Sander.

Shortly after, a voice of an axe being pulled downwards was coming towards them. As the voice was being heard, it suddenly stopped and an arrow came from nowhere, it hit Drew's eye and he fell down and died, then Sander smiled. He showed his true colors to John and Sonya. They all watched the fierce man coming towards them while pulling his axe. Sander ordered him to kill both John and Sonya, He was walking towards John and Sonya, as he reached near them, he suddenly changed his mind and threw his huge axe at Sander and it chopped his(Sander) head off.

John then low blowed the fierce man and he fell down for some time, then John and Sonya started running. They were running as fast as they could. They ran and Sonya got tired and sat down for a rest and John said," c'mon let's move" and Sonya, "I can't go any further."

And as they were conversing, a voice of an axe being pulled downwards was being heard by them.

They stood up and started running again but Sonya suddenly stopped.

John looked behind and saw Sonya stopped, "Let's move." said John. Not knowing Sonya was shot by an arrow. Sonya fell down and was bleeding from her chest. John ran to check on her and she said, "Go!", John said," No I can't leave you here." "Go!" Said Sonya and then John stood up and was running while crying.

He then reached an open place and he stopped, he was calling out the fierce man. He said, "C'mon and finish me off."(he was the only one left). He had that same voice of an axe being pulled.

About a few seconds, the fierce man came out pulling his axe. He( the fierce man then left his axe to fall down and wanted to face John like a man.

He moved towards John and John said, "Finish me!". And then the fierce man punched John in the face and John was bleeding, he then came, punched him again and lifted him up and threw him on a tree. He then came again and lifted John up and head-butted him on his chest and threw him near the huge axe.

As the fierce man came closer and stood near John, who was badly hurt, and the fierce man laughed so loud. And suddenly, John cut his( the fierce man) left leg by using his own axe against him.

John then stood up and cut his( fierce man) leg again and the fierce man fell down and was in his knees.

John cut his waist and then cut his head and said, "that was for all of my friends." And then John kicked his( the fierce man) body and Sérgio's phone fell from his( the fierce man) pocket.

John took it and made a phone call.

After about twenty minutes, a helicopter came and picked John and took him to hospital.

That's why I call this "Too bad" or "Not good" for John and his friends.