Escape From Paradise

Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure

Good piece of writing. I'm hooked into reading this. It is carefully drafted and the synopsis is eye catching. Can't wait for more updates. Keep doing you.

The quality of the writing is very good, the author describes the scenarios very well. There was always a bit of mystery here and there that made me want to read more to see what would happen next. The only thing that bothered me a little was the length of the paragraphs, but it depends from person to person, otherwise it was really good to me.

Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.

Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea. This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics And also the supporting cast of characters is excellent. Please update more author.

The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.

Definitely another hidden gem. This novel is beyond flawless and contains a very commendable writing style. The author's wording is incredibly poetic but not difficult to understand. The transitions at times are a bit confusing but it got clearer the more I read when I got to understand the flow. The novel overall is worth the time to read 👍

The book's writing quality is excellent. I personally like the first paragraphs of its every chapter. The world backgroud was good from the very begingging and it was getting more clearer throughout the chapters. Overall, the book was great. You are doing a good job, author.

Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!

A captivating story that draws the readers in with every exhilarating act, beautifully described scene of people or landscape and unrelenting emotions that makes the readers feel what the characters are feeling. Quite unique and a strongly recommended read. Well done author.

Really well written story and a unique world building. Its like a futuristic cyberpunk but with mysterious powers in the blend. That said, the scenes of carnage are just described using a few words. It can be expanded upon to make people feel the impact. And the paragraphing should be done properly..shorter paragraphs would be easier to read and floow. Keep up the great work

this book was rather unique when it comes to character design and world building I was rather surprised to see that the main character isn't looking at the present.

The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future. One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.

Amazing, your writing style on your story is truly amazing. Even at the first chapter it got me hooked into it, so keep on going at the story, I can't wait.