I am Invincible in DragonBall
Author: X_09
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Sole met a Supreme Being after his death who gave him three wishes . Sole decided to reincarnate in dragon ball , as a Saiyan on planet Vegeta with Gilgamesh's Gate Of Babylon . Follow Sole in the world of dragon ball as he creates his legend of invisibility and see how he make Berus the Destroyer his little brother and Whis his brother-in-law.
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The MC in story is just f**king OP.
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You really need to go over everything and reread. I made some small comments but there are way too many errors and run ons. Read it out loud if you have to. It needs work. Also its very jumbled doesnt really make it easy to read while were jumping from point to point. Feels like were reading a bullet point instead of a story. I hope that ypu reread it and edit it. While expanding a bit more on world building. You have some slight potiential here but your shooting yourself in the leg. Just take your time and reread before posting. You can save yourself a lot of time and effort just by rereading.
Did not begin reading just liked to be the First Rewiew so whether this is Trash or not I don't know. So just skip my Rewiew if you like to know how this Novel is. .......................................................................... Why are you still reading my Rewiew? Are you really that bored... well me to... anyways how are you, are you fine and how was your day are you feeling good. No... well I to did not have a good day and I to am not feeling good or fin so how about you give this a like...... or not whatever you like to do😁 I think I wrote enough so Good Bye to all those that either liked or hated on this