I don’t like reading… But, I can say that this book was enjoyable. One thing is that when you say “a old man” it should be “an old man”. Another thing, instead of continuously saying “the leader of Harmony Inc.” you should give him a name and go by that.
2 years ago
1
Lanae_Bell
Loved it!!
This was a very interesting story.
I loved it
. Your a very talented write with a great creativemind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2 years ago
1
Unkn0wnWrit3r
This book is from my own person ideals and some things that I learnt through life so please enjoy cause I tried my best and I never thought that I would ever write in my life so this is a big step for me.
I don’t like reading… But, I can say that this book was enjoyable. One thing is that when you say “a old man” it should be “an old man”. Another thing, instead of continuously saying “the leader of Harmony Inc.” you should give him a name and go by that.
Loved it!! This was a very interesting story. I loved it . Your a very talented write with a great creativemind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This book is from my own person ideals and some things that I learnt through life so please enjoy cause I tried my best and I never thought that I would ever write in my life so this is a big step for me.