Surviving The Walking Dead

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Has this been dropped??????!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEE DONT DROOOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The book had a lot of potential but sadly the author seems unresponsive. It has 7 chapters and still 40 people gave good reviews despite the story being just near the beginning this explains that this fanfic would have been great if the author would have continued. Every aspect of the story is great I just have issues with the update stability. Hope the author picks it up later on or atleast briefs us if this is dropped.

(Review as of Chapter 7) So far, the story as a whole has very little working against it and much more going for it. Lets start with the Cons (few as they may be). [Cons:] The MC - Harry - does at times feel more like a super human rather than a normal human; which seems intentional rather than accidental. I personally prefer that and im sure many others like me do as well, however, it does - at times - take away some of that suspense and sheer brutality that comes along with the apocalypse. Humanity struggles to survive against both the living and the walking dead while neither is their true enemy; for but hunger and the harshness of the untamed world itself shall be their ultimate undoing. It is in our natures as humans to adapt and adapt quickly. All it would take is one generation raised within the ruined world for our species to learn how to thrive once more. We will learn to walk amongst the dead and watch our backs against the living. Yet it will take us much longer to solve our supply situation. Humans have grown accustomed to simple luxuries. From expecting mothers, to the elderly, there are things which we need; things which will no longer be created. Our society must regress if we are to survive. Yet all humanity has ever known is progress. It is a situation which is often best portrayed in apocalyptic settings. I naturally don’t know what you have planned for their group, however, just keep in mind that even your MC will need to worry about things like food, water, and shelter. He can be this great slayer of the dead, yet such a body requires more nutrients to keep running. Just something to keep in mind. The CDC, Farm, and Pre-Prison arcs are your best times to show how truly hellish and unforgiving the world has become. Take your time to set your story up; build a world with which we can become lost within. You dont need to follow the given plot, rather use both it and other forms of media as your guide while bringing us down a path unseen. [Pros:] Lets be honest, there are many and I could extend this review greatly but ill summarize. Grammar: 9/10, very few errors and even those extremely minor ones dont take away from the story. Plot: 8/10, has the potential of being 10/10 yet its still early and it hasnt derailed much from the original (yet) so my rating will be conservative for now. Story Telling: 8/10, for what you are going for its pretty well done but again I hope you make the story feel REAL. Like a world which i could see/visualize myself in rather while in reading. I want to see the story unfold before my minds eye rather then having it just be words upon a page; A Story. Potential: 10/10, no words needed; we see it. As for things like update stability, don’t care. Always felt it was a stupid thing to rate. Take as long as you need. Post once a month for all I care just go out and create an Epic. I think i’ve said enough but i’m looking foward to following along with what you manage to create.

I need more of this!!!! This is a great read but it seems the author has stopped writing this. this need to be continued i need this in my life.

Really good, no grammar mistakes, the writing is really well done, the mc is pretty likeable , his power's are not too op but still powerful to allow him to survive and thrive, overall I'd give this fanfic a 9/10

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7 chapters and already dropped.. cmon man.. dont write at all if you dont write above 10 or 20 chapters..................................................

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Amazing fic worth the time trust me. Just give it a try. The story has great potential, currently at chapter 4, hopefully the quality of the story doesn't fall. And please don't this author. PLEASE.