Apocalypse in the World of Magic
A young girl, a college student, works day in and day out to pay for her studies, but she dies from working so hard.
Then she finds herself in a new world in the body of a 12-year-old girl named Lilian.
"What? I'm in another world ... and on top of that there's a world overrun by a zombie apocalypse ... and there's magic ... how can it get any better than this?".
Join Lilian on this incredible adventure into a whole new world, where she will explore every part of it and possibly find a way to save it?
Hello, this is my first novel, so any constructive criticism is very welcome to help me improve.
This is the English version of the novel, there is one in Portuguese.
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It's ecstatic to read a different novel. The combination of zombie apocalypse and monsters dungeon-like is unique! I couldn't wait for the next updates! (≧◡≦)
Huge potential for an idea like this, i’ve never thought of making a Zombie/LitRpg/fantasy novel before. Of course it’s because i never saw one before but i loved this idea and considering it is the first novel of the author the minor problems are reasonable i am lookihg forward to seeing what you can make next.
The story so far is very promising, and even though there are some minor mistakes here and there due to lack of experience, the author has potential and I am sure she can improve a lot. Keep it up and all the best!
Okay so this is very good. Somewhat cliche here and there but the fresh story and setting really bring this to live. Taking the familiar and making it seem fresh is quite an achievement The author writes very well. It's simple , direct but very effective. Really helps paints images in my mind effectively. Please keep on writing cause you're really gifted.
This novel keeps getting better and better. The style is just unique. This is promising and engaging. Can't wait for what the next chapter might hold!!
i was enthralled and read it in one sitting . the writing draws you into this mystical world that feels so real. im looking forward to the next chapter.
Is a 5 star for you author. The story was well plotted. I'm not a fan of Mage but the story is interesting from chapter one. hooking me from the start. the characters are well define. and the writing is smooth easy to understand.
A great adventure story. The further you go, the better it gets. And Lilian’s powers are so cool. A beautifully created world and an awesome lead to follow. The possibilities of her powers just make the whole story more exciting. Can’t wait to see where it goes.
This is a good system novel. This got to be one of my favorites, can't want to read more keep up the good work sir. I'll keep on reading for new chapters.
A story of great potential! I love how the first chapter showed the origin of the system. The FL is quite consistent, as well as the other characters. The world building is explained thoroughly and there's huge rooms for more adventure!