Willow Wander: A young girl learns that she was meant to do more than she ever imagined. She had no parents to take care of her. She is very poor. But she rises above her fears and became a legendary beast rider. She learns all she needs is friendship and not other people's opinions...

Willow Wander:- Completing The Delfine Circle

Amazing work !!
The story development is great as well as characters are well crafted. 
Loved your work !! keep up !!
keep updating chapters !! readers want more.😇😇

Hey, am I the first. Great! Happy to have a girl rise. Great character design..need some work in the story development.. keep going. Best of luck

Hello Author, so good so far👍. The world background and the superpowers is my favourite part in this book🙂. Can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!🤩 keep updating!!👌👌

Here is my honest thought about this novel based on what I have read so far:

World building: I do like the world building give us the vibe that the world isn't on earth and I like the author way of establishing info dump with a dialogue from a character. However, I do believe the author will establish and give more description about the world itself, so it can make the reader especially my personal opinion, more exciting to read your book.

Character: The character so far is quite decent and I indeed find some showing with the main character in this story. But, I am sorry to say this, I think you should give the character more description about their appearance and I also can see some interesting development in this story especially with the main character.

As for the writing quality this is only my personal advice and it's okay you disagreed with. First of all, you should give more description and writing it in a smooth flow. For the dialogue, I suggest to you this format....character said to make the reader easier to read and the flow of the story smoother.

Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!


