Naruto the Uzumaki

Interesting because it's so hard to find fluffy romance type of Naruto fics on webnovel. Usually it's mostly action or harem type of novels. Oh god, also the gamer or system ones. Finding a slow paced, slice of life, with fluff on the tags is a nice change of pace. Don't butcher this fics, I have high hopes...

You've intrigued me shounen. I'm so done with the bad third hokage trope even though Kishimoto himself didn't intend Hiruzen to be seen in that light. What's more a slice of life and fluff fic? Tsundere and smart Naruto? Chakra chains and the sensory ability?

I swear I’ve read this story before on fanfiction.net. Maybe it’s my imagination or something I don’t really care. Romance is weird and is a bit forced, but can mostly be ignored. It’s just a small annoyance while reading really. The main thing that annoys me are the characters in the story. The fact that every shinobi just crumples into guilt and self-loathing as soon as they see Naruto cry is cringy to me. No one was actually really close enough to Naruto to elicit that type of reaction out of themselves when they see him cry. Naruto hasn’t even seen Kakashi yet, and yet he’s close enough to Kakashi to make him cry. All the characters just goes into little balls of depression and guilt whenever they see Naruto sad. Which is kinda awkward not gonna lie. These extremely jaded people crying over some orphan child they barely know. Sure said orphan is the son of their friend, but they never actually interacted with him to form any attactchment whatsoever. I’m going to make a comparison to real life now. When I see those ads about starving children in Africa or something I feel sad, but I’m not going to cry about it. Honestly we’ve probably seen hundreds of ads about charity, but realistically only .01% of us actually donate a substantial amount of money to help someone.

Im obsessed now of this because of 1 romantic scene so take my reiview and all of my upcoming stones.......................................................................................

I would say this story is going pretty good so far. And I like character development. You could enjoy it and in my opinion a worthy fanfiction.

This fic is very good! Keep writing autor-san as this is a great naruto verse fanfic. I love the fact that his naruto is more a mix of his parents than just looks, and I also love him being a tsundere, lol. And long live Ino, a great romantic couple!

It’s Just a basic naruto fanfic only kinda different thing is that the 3rd isn’t evil and naruto is a tsundere the writing Quality is decent and the conversations between characters is ok but nothing really special about it

Ayo, I just wanted to say this is such a solid story. I reread this multiple times. The way the characters interact aren’t robotic and is actually natural. While reading it I can also feel the characters emotions which is a plus. I recommend this to anyone who sees this review. A few things to keep in mind however, first it’s an au. Second, Naruto’s personality Is different and is more powerful too. Third, it’s a slice of life fic. It’s a slow burn so it would progress slowly. Fourth, it’s an Ino x Naruto fanfic. Ino being the female lead. I see some comments pushing for the author to make it a harem, but either way it’s good even without one. And plus I totally think a harem would ruin this

good story so far. the ultra rare tsundere naruto is perhaps the most interesting spin on naruto's character I've read in fanfiction. also appreciate that 3rd hokage isnt written off as evil in this story.

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Absolutely love the story. Would love to read more. Please keep updating the story. I am also looking forward to reading the meeting between tsundere Naruto and tsundere Kurama.

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