Naruto: Starting From The Beginning

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After reading chapter 21, I would say that I'm satisfied. This fic definitely has a ton of potential with the unique idea. So far, there are barely any grammar errors/mistakes, with the few mistakes barely being noticeable. The world background is Naruto, so I don't need to say anything about that. MC is Itachi and actually acts like him, so that's a 5 star for character design. The stability of updates is definitely 5 stars, and for the story development, I'll do 5 stars as well since the story is progressing really nicely, without any holes in the story (At least, until chapter 21). TLDR; Good story about Itachi, with Itachi actually acting like himself for once. Hope you don't drop Author-san and hope you keep up the good work :)

The progress of the story is great, I'm waiting for the continuation, but if you make a harem, I will never read it again The progress of the story is great, I'm waiting for the continuation, but if you make a harem, I will never read it again

Make it a harem and I'll never forgive you. I'll kill you as well. .........................................................................

I honestly am surprised by how good this fanfic is. I don't expect this much character design, dialogue and not to mention the near flawless grammer. If you want to read a great Naruto fanfic based on Itachi, I recommend this very much. Props to the author for creating a wonderful fanfiction.

This novel is really good. Itachi acts like Itachi. The chapter lengths are decently long. The only problem is that there are no scene breaks. At all. Which is extremely jarring when the perspective shifts at least once or twice every chapter. It's annoying, but other than that, this novel is great.

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It's really good and the characters act the way they should and without them being OC. I just hope it continues to hold such a good standard

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so i am writing this first and foremost because I felt bad about reading such a awesome story without giving at least little feedback. just want to tell the author he is doing a great job and I look forward to more updates

The fanfic is great it's as if there was a series on Itachi getting reincarnated in himself at the age of 5 this would be the script. Every character every arc leads to another great arc. the author uses every part of the character or situation and includes it in the story as if it is natural not forced to make a situation. Great so far.

Honestly I love how you've stuck to Itachi's character and kept some of the characters personalities relatively the same. Granted some had to be changed because of Itachi changing the past and certain people not dying or events not happening. Just one thing, as Heir to the Uchiha clan, if Itachi is not planning on betraying the village or committing the genocide of the Uchiha Clan, will he ever acknowledge Izumi's feelings, and or reciprocate them? Obviously when they're older. But I do believe in Canon he loved her as well. I'd just like to see that relationship happen in this Fanfic as it didn't have the chance to in Canon for obvious reasons.

Really enjoyed this book so far not a lot of fanfic that aren’t just self inserts or brooding edge lords as main characters.—————————————————