The Epic of Azathoth

It started great but the main reason why I left is that the story started with a great idea and then the author made sure to kill all vibe of immersion by doing absurd jokes ( those type of jokes that are embarrasing to the point where if a friend made the same I would cut all contact with him the next day ) . I also gave 3 stars on writting as the quality is really reaaally low, Stability of Updates 3 stars but it's also quite slow to update and Story Development 2 stars as I felt no story immersion at all .

I was hoping to find an adventure time ff at last, and it started off right ... But this just keeps getting farther and farther away and it becomes so absurdly boring. you wanted it to get strong little by little, and with enough reason, but here it jumps from basic to op in 1 chapter. I think many wanted to see what an adventure time ff would be like, and were totally disappointed ... Nothing more to say ... terrible.

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I liked the beginning, he stsrted out with one op skill and I thought “wow thats a strong skill if he grinds the levels out and gets good support skills for it!” but then When he uses the skill it seems like it should be at around lv75 by the amout of power and drain it has on him when he uses it (he can pretty much use the blood of the things he kills with little to no mana drain and just has a huge blood pool now that can deal strong poison damage off one hit). Thats just his first skill within like 6 chapters he gets more op skills that ar basically around lv 60-80 in stregth while being lv 1 and kills a god while being lv7. . .a weakened one but a god is a god. . .and the MC is the BIGGEST EDGE LORD IV’E SEEN IN A WHILE SO BE WARNED! He also is waaaaay to lucky when he rolls for loot from missions and gets not one but TWO weapons that can destroy basically anything (one of them is so strong to destroy the world by the way) and gets a SSS rank armor while Wanting to be a berserker (berserkers usually wear little to no armor and usually stick to hide or leather for armor) he also can just make any skill he wants with like at most a hour of effort. So with that being said I would not read this if you like your stories to have character growth, BUT if you want a dumb “I don’t wanna have to think or be in my feels” story give it a try!

the novel is starting off very well and I pointed out an issue for the author to correct and he fixed it so that gave me hope in this novel not being dropped

This is not harem bruh, 3 girl only polygamy 3 or 4 wife are polygamy that's use in our world so delete part you say this harem . It's only normal polygamy here , many men marry 4 wife now so it's normal even in many country just some people cannot accept it yet . harem category have 4 type small harem 5 to 7 wife harem 7 to 15 wife huge harem 15 to 30 wife massive harem 30 to ???? wife Btw why now in our world we can marry 4 wife ? because now women are to many 60% people in this world are women now , I don't why men suddenly decrease

mc sees family getting gunned by people on motorcycles, first thought is how good looking the mom is. mc is not op by personal strength but by getting babysit by system. i hate this fic and the mc

Writing quality : 3/5. Writing quality is decent, atleast above average compared to other stories on this site, nothing to complain about really Story : 2/5. edgy... too edgy (for my taste that is) Character : Edgy and Confusing Update stability : Pretty good? (I guess?) World background : Idk... , At one point he was near a city, city got blasted by nuclear weapon or something?, he... survived? no radiation, no shockwave no nothing he just walk away to random dieection and by chance found a dungeon, fought a god found a chest when opening it, got transported again into another dungeon? wut? bruh... im confusion I really want to like this story especialy because of the first few chapter is decent enough, but it's been boring, nonsensical, and overall, too edgy for my taste

First review, seems good so far🙂.

The story is good and have an stable update(not daily mind you but still decent). It’s a story about an OP MC and no nerfs so far… Actually this is enough for me to give an opportunity to any story. I’m giving the 5 start the author improve and you can see it each chapter(author dont make me look bad, I’m watching you 🧐).

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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

AUTHOR PLS ADD MORE CHAPTERS, I REALLY LOVE THE STORY SO PLS DROPPED .