Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

"I just pray to God it works but I highly doubt it", she said.

" Don't worry it will be Ok", I consoled her.

"When will you come back?", I asked her.

" I have to convince Ramiz first as soon as he let me I will be back", she sighed.

"I won't let anything happen to you Mina", I told her.

" I know it's just that I'm a worrier. I don't want to damp our plan", she whispered.

"No dear you won't trust me", I told her.

She stood up unsteadily I was afraid that it was too much for her.

She walked off then closed the door behind her. I sat down tensed counting the moments praying that my plan worked. I also hoped that Ramiz allows it. All of it depended on him and his performance of today. Minutes passed and I walked inside the room feeling uncomfortable. That's when I heard the knock I immediately resumed my sitting position on the bed appearing relaxed.

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