Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

"Can I help you with something?", he asked with a no sincere smile.

" Yes actually. I would like to talk to you about something", I said. I knew I was stalling. I had no idea about what to say hence the word something. I hope I'm not that transparent or this is going to fail before it ever takes off.

"What is it Mara?", he asked with a show of concern but with no actual compassion.

" I'm sorry, for being mean", I told him.

"It's Ok Mara. I always cared about you. I wish we didn't stand on opposite sides when we are fighting for the same side", he said with a gleam in his eyes.

" You have trained me and helped me every time but I always disrespected you", I said biting my tongue. It's tougher than I thought I wish I didn't have to lie through my teeth.

Breakthrough 90