Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

"Let's go", Kay ordered. I sighed. The climb is going to happen today only I wasn't feeling that good. My keg had been paining a lot and that was not a new thing only it was feeling worse like it was rotten. I bit my lips hard to stop myself from crying out aloud. I'm not new to hurt or pain but what is pestering me is that Lucien is going to get captured today. That will be all my fault. I sighed it wasn't the original plan when I got started but it was where it had ended. Unless I do something but I could hardly walk much do anything.

" Here ", he said putting crutches for me.

" That is a nice gesture", I said.

"No, it is not. Make haste", he said.

I tried to get up but I couldn't so Kay helped with the help of Kay and the crutches I walked. Though it felt good to walk the pain was immense. I wanted to bite my lips off from the hurt I was enduring.

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