Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

I couldn't stop pacing inside the camp shared with Becca. All of our friends are here. I wish there was something that I could hurl to get rid of my frustration. If only I hadn't forced my prince to be here. How I wished to react differently on his plan to stay in the woods forever. It broke me to watch Lucien treated like dirt. Blood boiled in my body. It is the fault of Amir. I wish I could pierce my arrow right into his heart.

"No I can't. How can I? After watching Lucien in chains. I should end Amir's life. It is his fault", I told Becca.

"No it isn't your boyfriend had done things that made him deserve a fee mistreatment", said Becca.

"But he has changed", I explained that to her.

"Maybe he has or hasn't. But what about his previous actions he must take some responsibility at least", said Becca.

"I promised him redemption. But instead I ended giving him more punishment ", I told her.

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