Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

"I have no back up an other than to fight Igor", I told Lucien

"I know it is valid from your view point. Even I have issues against him. But the war is no good. It will kill off the rest of the people left scarred by the war", said Lucien.

"I understand Lucien but how far we can live in fear of unknown. We have to do something to help the people", I told Lucien.

"You have seen the war at its worst but trust me when I say there are parts worse than that. There is no excuse for starting a war. You will pay the price and it will be too much that you could never pay up in this life time", said Lucien. I sighed but did not say anything. I knew Lucien is right but I can't listen to him especially right now. I have to liberate these people and I will pay the price. I will die before bowing down to Igor again.

"My queen", said a voice outside our hut.

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