Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

We were taken by a few guards again outside. I was confused and was immediately on alert. I knew that something was going to go wrong. Ron, Kurt and Lucien had decided to go with what Shane says but I knew that it was going to be tricky. For one Shane was never to be trusted. But Mason also insisted that I listen to Shane that was why I was confused. I have asked my group to stick together no matter what he says. I'm afraid something would befall upon all of us if we go separate ways. But there was some thing wrong though the others couldn't see it I could feel it somewhere on the back of my mind.

We were placed before a gigantic boat. I was surprised it was a bit old but it had been maintained nicely. Probably by Shane and party. My lips tightened he was serious about going out of the island.

"Hello Mara", I heard his cheerful voice. I turned around and found him standing right behind me.

"Hello Shane", I greeted him but without a smile.

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