Jeethz

A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.

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Lycan's Sin

<p>Walking the short distance felt like a huge thing. But actually the confrontation is making me a little bit nervous. I know what ever faults he has but I could never doubt him as a father. He cares for the Lucy. But the difference is that he don't know how to protect her. He was having a tough time to see his wife for what she is? A real time bitch. Who else would hurt a little girl? I had no clue about her motives? Maybe she is after Lucien. But she already has him. I'm completely out of her. Nothing make sense. When I reached where I got the information he visits sometime I never expected him to be there. But there he was looking at the sea. There is hardly anyone here. The timing is wrong for the visit. The scorching summer sun shine on us. He stiffened a moment. I knew he could smell me. I had only seen him. But the sense of Lycan's are very good. They could see, hear and smell you much faster. He is a good one for that.</p>

<p>"You are back", he said slowly turning to me.</p>

Fight another day 215