After he died in his old world, Asher woke in a new world as a child. A world of magic and wonder was now before him. He found a world in which he might find his happiness, he was born a duke’s son. His life was set to easy mode. But will his new world be any different from his pervious life? The old saying is ‘damned if you damned if you don’t.’ So why not go alittle wild? You never know if you will get another chance.
I am hooked. The main character is interesting. I like how the author explores what the MC is about. The world building is cool, I want to know more about the world and explore it through the MC's eyes. Was impressed with the progression, the pacing is done well. Fun characters. I like it :) Looking forward to more. Note to any new readers: the grammar is a little shaky at times , but you can still easily comprehend what is being said.
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A well written story, but it does seem to be missing a hook of some kind. There not much that differentiates it from all the other born in a fantasy world with a system. It looks like there is hints that the romance will be non-traditional which might add something as the story develops.