The Trials of Love

Author here! Thank you to everyone that has given this story an opportunity. Also thanks for all the readers and writers who have given me their feedback!

The story plot's concept was wholesome. I can say this work is made when the author is very inspired to write. Though the first chap is short, it is enough to be hooked from the start. Not only did meticulously make the story but she also made the characters very lifelike. Creating a memorable and wholesome story as a general feeling after reading. Hope you will find success! But I know you will 😁

Review time~ First of all, you are a great author and you clearly know what you need to express through your writing. You did a good job with the characters info since thanks to that I didn't have any confusion about who is who? Then your prologue it was short, simple and attention-grabbing especially the last line. I like it the best! After that, the storyline begins. I must say your writing is very creative since the words you use to convey their clothing to personality and the surroundings are very elegant and poetic. And the theme of reincarnation along with the arranged marriage sequence is a good choice. It's a fresh concept that I have read so far. And you are truly hardworking, posting 9 chapters in less than a week is in no way a task. And I believe if you keep up with this pace, you will get contacted soon. Last but not the least you should change your book cover since it's very simple and doesn't really catch one's eye. A good cover means more reader~so note my words. Now then, all the best and happy writing!

Where do I even start? I'm still very much processing the story, but the first words that come to mind are beautiful and hidden gem. Now onto my review. This is quite exquisite read and neatly written story, with compelling leads and immersive details especially in the dialogue writing. The first thing that stands out is the beautiful writing, it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, capable of instantly pulling the readers in and enchanting them. Everything about this book is captivating, from the concept, ill fated love story between Romeo and Juliet in the cultivation world, to the immersive details of the world around them. I just couldn't get enough of Ruo Yin, such a pitiful yet very lovable female character. Zhan Luo as the male lead is also a nicely written character. I hope they will have their forever after in this second life. Anyways, thank you for the story Hana! It's a nice reading expression and well, good luck!

Amazingly written, the story is an epic of love, freedom and destiny. Be sure to give this novel a read, especially if you are a fan of love that transcends history!

The story is very fascinating, I have only read a few chapters but I feel like I am on an adventure with the cast. I am looking forward to what will happen next.

Writing Quality: I rarely see any grammatical errors. The writing quality was great as it visualize the story very well. Each chapter was well written and holds interest. Stability of Updates: Updates are steady and promising. Story Development: The first lives are very fast pace, and this may be because the author wants to get to the second lifetime as soon as possible. But even then, they were very well written and immersive. We really get to know the main leads even in the first lives. Character Design: The main leads were thoughtfully created. They feel alive and real with their personalities and goals. Even the villain felt real reading about him. World Background: The synopsis does not contain much information about world background, but reading the characters chapter I was able to get a sense of what kind of world they live in, and what the plot was about.

This book is amazing can't lie, I loved reading the chapters and hope to finish the rest of the book. Keep it up Author ,[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Interesting plot! 👏👏, the author gave us a new story that everyone would surely enjoy reading. I'd love how you describe the world background, keep up the good work, author!

CREATIVE PLOT! I love how to gave a brief about the characters, as I would be confused with the Chinese names if you haven't. The character design was done perfectly. The writing was easy to read and there weren't many grammar mistakes too. Overall a good read!! Keep Going!!

To be honest, I already favor zhan luo because I feel like he might be the character with the biggest change in the end, but thats just a guess. the story is already good tho and its just the beginning.

It's a good novel. The storyline was great, and I like the characterization. The story development and world-building were well-done. Although the plot was a little cliché, it doesn't drag the story down. It was unique in its own way. The writing style was really admirable. It has little to no grammatical errors, and it's easy to read. The author has done a great job.

You had me from the first chapter. Although the 1st chapter was short , it was well written to hook the reader. Everything is written with great consideration, from the characters to the setting. I'm definitely keeping an eye on this ❣️

The writing quality is also good along with the stable releases and close to none grammatical errors. I just feel like I want more of it. Hoping to read upcoming chapters