I should have seen it. I should have calculated it all and seen this. I am a guardian, so i should have seen this. Her. Why she was born now, after all this time. Them. My guardians. i should have known the endgame was this. I should have paid more attention. Or rather, i should have not included them in this mess.
Lit work. I honestly believe your book is good. It should be doing better, but it remains unnoticed. I can think of some reasons. You don't have a synopsis. You don't have a good book cover. These two factors are missing in your book. Also, enter into a contest that fits into the theme of your book. I think that will help you. Good work author!