Omicron Tales: Adventures Across Space
Author: Mr_Game_and_Time
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Many worlds need heroes to stand up against the Unfair, The Unjust, and all kinds of twisted beings. How will the heroes win against these within their universe?
Let's see what kind of adventure these heroes follow as the shadows slowly reveal themselves. They will struggle against them when these horrors appear... Just what will they find on this journey?
Some secrets need to be found while others should be left buried.
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Here is "MY" opinion Interesting story. There are definitely not many out there with their own unique world design. Action. Action scenes start appearing pretty early which I liked very much. Grammar. It was good at the beginning but got a bit worse later on. Might be cause you have time to edit them yet which is understandable. I saw randomly capitalized words frequently. (Or Is it a way to focus on some words? ) Characters. Thoughts of characters are explained nicely but lacked emotions. The conversations are to direct. However, the conversations later on are much better so it could be that I was too quick to judge. Additional. Some stuff are not explained. Though some are common concepts but since it is a different story you can clarify them in auxiliary chapters.
So far is quite interesting, not at all related to covid 👌 I like the world building as it really allows me to imagine well. But the character design for the Mc can use some works.
Great characters,love the creation, Keep this up Author they might be a few mistakes but this doesn't stop this book from getting any fun ,I love this book and will recommend it.