I didn't read much into this one as it has so few chapters compared to what I usually read. But I actually enjoyed the way you listed out dialogue and the style and technique you did it in. If you could fix the sentence incongruities that occur where certain things need explained in more depth than just one sentence in the beginning you would truly have an amazing story on your hands.
moreeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I didn't read much into this one as it has so few chapters compared to what I usually read. But I actually enjoyed the way you listed out dialogue and the style and technique you did it in. If you could fix the sentence incongruities that occur where certain things need explained in more depth than just one sentence in the beginning you would truly have an amazing story on your hands.
.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................🥱
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]