Parallel Memory

Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

I'll keep it short, after going through 40 chapters, I still no nothing about our Mc, not in the sense of his family and friends, but why he thinks how he thinks, why does his morals A B C, why is this his train of thought, who is he really, and this is problematic because then it has no essence, the mc has no character. This novel can still be saved however, but before you can build the world, I suggest you a singular person, our main character, for if the lens are dull, then the picture will so as well.

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

Quite creative immitation of Author's POV. Though it's just too much of a copy, all the series of events that occur in the novel are put in here with just slight modifications. I hope author can put his own plot instead of just copy pasting and replacing terms...

the story is good but where are you author😭😭

i can barely get past the cringe of the story but then u introduce Eleonore and yup can't bear it anymore she is just to dilusional. and that is the limit of cringe i can bear... plz tell me if we have to see her more in later chapter otherwise I'm out. if you are making a blatant copy of Author pov atleast make it good

❤️Dear Auther~ its my first/ and fav novel.... but its been 2/3 weeks without update still i m waiting patiently plz update soon/when ur free🤧 i am missing zero n hero 😟 .... stay healthy and safe~ giving u blessings from my home~

I have read it up to 400 chapters and it is very good story🤩

One of the best novel I have ever read addicted to this story 😁

Nice read. Please keep up the good work👍

the dialogue are all cringe, even after 324 chapter there is no specific love intrest or don't know if this a harem( its all confusing). in terms of character development there is minimum development after the starting. there is no sense of satisfaction in his achievements which are aren't even that great considering he has the knowledge of future. the whole plot seems to go down after chapter 170 ish, where he again become a side character. yes so I will describe this novel as cringe, great half story, disaster after that, annoying etc

hey author why do you don't come to discord and talk. and why didn't you update in these past few months. if you want a break or want to drop it just tell us beforehand. this is why I gave 1 star on updating stability and I want to ask when you start updating daily?? (and please answer I'm sick of waiting those past months😩)