The Last Twila
Author: RaiyAkumu
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Slowly my vision starts to fade away into the unknown abyss, and no matter what I attempt, the grasp of my strained conscience gradually moves out of grasp like a word that is right on the tip of your tongue but no matter what you do you cannot seem to recall it, and the longer you struggle the worse it gets. My body starts to feel colder and colder, my body heat escaping me. And the man removes his blade from my chest, wipes it down with a blood-stained neckerchief, and leaves me to die alone. Within minutes everything is gone, all pain resolved into the peacefulness of the void, the embodiment of nothingness. Suddenly my remaining conscience is seized by an unseen hand, and everything I knew is gone as if it never existed, to begin with.
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pretty cool idea there isnt a lot of writing quantity compared to other novels but you make up for it with great description and writing quality
"MY" honest review Story is unique. Nice Explanation of details ( Maybe too much explanation of each and every little thing but I am liking it) Huge plot developments dropping here and there but seems a bit hard to figure out. The plot itself is "mystery" as said in the tags Too less explanation of the plot while too much explanation of little things that seem unnecessary to the actual plot. ( Maybe it is some kinda way to make the actual plot more mysterious?) Difficult to get the plot but maybe that can be understood farther into the story. (well it's a mystery story) Since the plot seems kinda complex please don't get lost yourself 😅😅
ultimately I enjoyed reading the story you get a 99% score out of a 100% I finished reading it the details and descriptions were great the only issue was the small grammer issues otherwise it was perfect.
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
This is something I call a breath of fresh air, With every novel here using the meta's already set up by the people this novel seems to be coming up with there own concepts, I liked how stuff is explained in a not forced way, although some places it feel like too much info, The character got distinct personalities that is well, I feel like this novel will end up having an amazing world of it's own, So looking forward to more, Keep up the good work author~
The story was incredible! The writing style is perfect, and your grammar is flawless. Keep it up! I'm looking forward for more updates! :D <3
Great start, after a couple of chapters in, it already looks good af. The start was also amazing as well and the narrative is good af. Also loved that you wrote a review that wasn't 5/5 on your novel, really shows your character. (I could never lol)
The story is phenomenal and leaves the reader with a sense of intrigue I'm definitely adding this to my library! The perspective is unique and adds a different tone than one has come to expect of novels and I thoroughly enjoy that. The only room for improvement I could envision would be to correct some of the grammatical and typographical errors. There aren't an overwhelming number of them, but it would really put a polish on the already impressive novel.
Interesting lore and great descriptive writings, especially for the fight scenes. Although the recent chapters felt a bit stiff and rushed.
This story is indeed super interesting. The mystery factor is at all time high. The suspense created around MC is too good and even without making too many holes in the story. The grammer is all good (I can't judge that part much cuz english isn't my first language) The only flaw i found is that the paragraphs are a bit too long (but i think that by the time this novel becomes famous (soon enugh i presume) the flaw would be gone) The last thing i want to say to author: Keep up the good work! And for the readers finding new novels to read: this one is definately worth your time thank you for your time
The story is quite unique in a great way. I love how descriptive your writing style is. There's a straightforwardness that I can't help but admire. Keep up the good work!!
All the way to the seventh chapter was interesting and it kept me reading until the end of the newest chapter which is why I actually ended up enjoying it somehow because I'm usually not into reading novels.
I loved the world/characters. It felt very fantastical and magical. The names of the characters were also just cool to me. I feel as if the word choice could have been better in some places, but aside from that I was deeply enjoying this story.
First, let me say I don't read too much so yeah... anyway, a 3.6-star review is what I gave because the writing quality, in my opinion, is 8.9/10 I enjoy reading it, just it is hard for me to know what is going on... This may be intentional(or I am just unable to comprehend the details,) and if it is then I think it is fine as long as it is done in a good manner, but overall I found it to be quite enjoyable to read. I might keep reading it at times when I get bored.
A solid 4.6 The writing is wonderful. Grammar isn't bad at all. Though, I feel like it needs more flow. The characters! Though not much have been covered about the characters; it seems like the main lead is actually more interesting than they thought. The main lead holds some sort of ability, though it has been yet to be explained. I honestly love the blind girl's eyes which switches colors depending on her mood. I think it's an astounding concept. Ultimately, this is a wonderful book with lots of potential. I've already placed it on my library. Well, best of wishes to the author.