My Ultimate Crush is my Roommate

My Ultimate Crush is my Roommate

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Author: thehighpriestess
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With rental prices soaring, Amara has no choice but to look for a roommate to split the costs, or she risks sleeping on the streets. To her horror, the only roommate candidate is her most hated individual, Xavier Sylvester! Will living together help the both of them bridge the gap from enemies to something more?

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Stormzz
Stormzz

The story is pretty well paced, each chapter feels a good length to read, and there are updates frequently. The writing needs improvement. I noticed both tense changes and singular / plural mixups. I wasn't a fan of the characters, their dialogue felt off to me. The world could also be more fleshed out. It's not really a big thing for me in novels set in our world, but calling places "City A" and "City B" is just poor writing.

3 years ago
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hidingpanduh
hidingpanduh

Yeeeee! Enjoying this a lot so far. Love the FL lead and her reactions to her BFF Gio hahaa and the way she is absolutely in denial and thirsty af for Xavier even though it makes sense she wouldn’t admit it lololol since he has hurt her, I am interested to find out exactly what happened! Aside from some switching tenses, the writing is quite good! Keep it up I’m super excited to read more :D

3 years ago
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Rayne_Rue
Rayne_Rue

Great work here author, love the work it's amazing keep it up, love the character's good job, the plot is amazing I love it, and please update soon!!

3 years ago
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Morororo
Morororo

Although I'm not into romance, yours are fascinating to read, the character designs, the whole surrounding description is good. Looking forward to the next chapter. Great work author!

3 years ago
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Sailfish
Sailfish

A reasonable start to a romance novel. I hope something crazy happens before they reevaluate their relationship. If you can, please include scenes of characters doing something which gives insight into their personality. I enjoyed the conversations in this novel.

3 years ago
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pedro_corti
pedro_corti

An interesting read. Very well thought out and written. There is no mistaken, this is a fascinating novel that must be read. Great job author.

3 years ago
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