The story's okay 👍. My only complaint about it (only one I'll mention here) is the 'instant mastery' ability. Never liked it, never will (e g. he gets a leadership ability at level 1, it maxes out immediately and then all of a sudden, any plan he makes will never fail. It's like he missed out on a whole growth period of learning from mistakes and whatnot etc.). Takes all the fun out of a story. Still like the story though.
Hope it gets better.
3 years ago
1
Muthoni_Murira
I like that the MC got to customise his own transmigration and from the first few chapters, I can tell that the story has a lot of potential.
Aside from grammar issues that could be fixed with a little editing, the story is good.
Please work hard and good luck.
3 years ago
1
The_Crimson_Abyss
I haven't read it till now but like Gamer System so 5* from me.
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3 years ago
0
Majin_Vibez
the story is good but the vibe sucks and the writing is bad. hope you get better I'll do another review.------------------------------------
The story's okay 👍. My only complaint about it (only one I'll mention here) is the 'instant mastery' ability. Never liked it, never will (e g. he gets a leadership ability at level 1, it maxes out immediately and then all of a sudden, any plan he makes will never fail. It's like he missed out on a whole growth period of learning from mistakes and whatnot etc.). Takes all the fun out of a story. Still like the story though. Hope it gets better.
I like that the MC got to customise his own transmigration and from the first few chapters, I can tell that the story has a lot of potential. Aside from grammar issues that could be fixed with a little editing, the story is good. Please work hard and good luck.
I haven't read it till now but like Gamer System so 5* from me. ...............................................................................................
the story is good but the vibe sucks and the writing is bad. hope you get better I'll do another review.------------------------------------