24 year-old college graduate Liv Spade enters the realm of journaling--what she's always dreamed of. When attractive men in business suits are thrown into the mix how will she ever focus on getting the editors job she wants? It's not everyday that every man in the office falls in love with you..who will she choose?
A great start. I like the characters so far, though the FL is a bit egotistic as Sam in the book also mentioned, when she said she's the CEO's daughter I was like holeeee up miss thing, you go around saying that to everyone? It did seem contradictory to her hard working defensive stance when she was talking to Nolan but I wasn't sure if she was being sarcastic or not. You're building a strong foundation to the story and I can't wait to see what else happens with Nolan who seems frustrating to have as a boss/kind of weird LOL all "I don't want you but I want you" sort of vibe. I wonder what's up with that and what his intention is behind this and his attitude at the interview. Great start, keep writing! Good luck on WPC!!!
Normally, I'm not a fan of this genre, but as I started reading your story, I was disappointed since it only had 5 chapters! I need more of this, author!!!! This novel has potential. I wish you luck in the competition.
Cool novel, keep it up auths, yeah.. i know, i'm horrible with nicknames. But great novel, no kidding, check it out i bet you'll love to read it.
it is a nice story it amused me much especially the synopsis is[img=update] superclass I m waiting for next chapter [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
So good! Im hoping for some more of the story to thicken up. such developmental potential! 10/10 Recommend for those searching for an office love Triangle
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Its been a while since ive read a story that revolves the love interest around the FL. So far i love the characters! Each has their own unique personalities.