Ying Huo the shadowed kings child

My first published novel!!! Please forgive the rushed intro, I did the auxiliary and the first chapter in one day without proper planning in 12 hours. If you find mistakes please let me know. Also, I don't know if I should add herem to the tags as I'm only going to add 2(2nd one is a dunno) and although I added the 18+ it's mostly to cover my own ass as many sites can get touchy about things, And if there is torcher (undecided) I won't hold any punches. Let me know if you like it. if you give a 1 or a 2 star at least let me know what I could change for future novels if not this one. Happy reading!