Eliana has always been the good girl, down to earth. Never in trouble. But, there's a side to her she thought no now knew - and Matthew seems to know it all too well; from head to toe.
Amazing! Curious as to when the updates are going to be. But, the author does a great job with transitioning chapters. Congratulations on an amazing book thus far.
Can't wait to read some more!
P.S - Once you get into the actual storyline, be sure to give us A LOT of these chapters. As a reader, it was amazing and very helpful.
3 years ago
1
Daoistj9XiY6
Very spot on!
Honestly, probably the best one of these books on here that I've began to read. I can see myself reading this one as soon as possible each time a new update is released. In a lot of books, when writing about sexual acts - they aren't very realistic at all. However, in this book this is something that would totally happen.
Something that probably has happened to many people, and the author knows how to perfectly describe the feelings of the acts and the need to want more.
I would love to see this book go paid. I would buy every chapter and send gifts all of the time! Keep up the great work!
3 years ago
1
Mary_Ann_Parriet
Lovely book! Couldn't believe how well everything flowed for being so full of the type of action. Can't wait to keep following the book.
:)
3 years ago
1
Lizzy_Chalupka
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3 years ago
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Lizzy_Chalupka_0386
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3 years ago
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LeRoyce_Strunk
Coming from a male standpoint, I would like to give you a huge compliment. When you were writing about Matthew and the way he did things - this is basically spot on how it happens in a lot of situations. I also really liked that you gave Eliana a dominant side too - not a lot of females have that but the ones that do - oh my god.
You're writing is great and I'm looking forward to following alone with the story as it progresses.
Amazing! Curious as to when the updates are going to be. But, the author does a great job with transitioning chapters. Congratulations on an amazing book thus far. Can't wait to read some more! P.S - Once you get into the actual storyline, be sure to give us A LOT of these chapters. As a reader, it was amazing and very helpful.
Very spot on! Honestly, probably the best one of these books on here that I've began to read. I can see myself reading this one as soon as possible each time a new update is released. In a lot of books, when writing about sexual acts - they aren't very realistic at all. However, in this book this is something that would totally happen. Something that probably has happened to many people, and the author knows how to perfectly describe the feelings of the acts and the need to want more. I would love to see this book go paid. I would buy every chapter and send gifts all of the time! Keep up the great work!
Lovely book! Couldn't believe how well everything flowed for being so full of the type of action. Can't wait to keep following the book. :)
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Coming from a male standpoint, I would like to give you a huge compliment. When you were writing about Matthew and the way he did things - this is basically spot on how it happens in a lot of situations. I also really liked that you gave Eliana a dominant side too - not a lot of females have that but the ones that do - oh my god. You're writing is great and I'm looking forward to following alone with the story as it progresses.