His Unyielding Obsession

This review is after having read the few chapters that have been published and I have to say I already love the Plot. The relationship between Nadia and Emily seems genuine and interesting. For me the story kicks of in chapter two when more characters are introduced. I Think my favorite character is going to be Mario, he sounds to be a trouble maker and it seems like Ajax will have to put a leash on him. The grammar is great, only a few miners that you hardly notice. A good story that I'm interested to see how it develops through the next chapters.

This is quite entertaining to read. In fact, it's very good. The story progresses at a fast pace that perfectly prevents you from getting bored. I've only read four chapters so far. I really liked it. I highly recommend reading this. You won't be disappointed at all.

The story plot is quite interesting, entertaining, and enticing with no grammatical errors and also with interesting characters. It was definitely a read for me.

A cool start of the story with a touch of mystery which would pull the readers drooling on your pages. Some need to proofread, but does not affect the running of the plot. Keep it up!

A good beginning with the friendship scenario. The lurking mystery is a call for everybody to follow the lead and unlock the Pandora's box. Give it a try, guys. :)

A very cool story especially ajax and his domineering mode. nice one author.😍😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😘😘😘😘😘😘💕💕💕💕..............................

Its a good story if you're into drama, romance, and hard slaps to the face. So, it has my vote. I recommend giving it a try and at least checking it out.

I've read a few chapters so far and I got to say, I've been enjoying it. The relationships between the characters seem well thought out, and real. The main characters are also all interesting, with an enticing plot behind it all.

I was so glad when the author changed it from first person point of view to a three person point of view, it really brought out the characters more. I love that there is a sort of mystery and suspense to it, makes you wonder why he is calling her my Nadia. I see emily and Nadia friendship as unhealthy and I think Emily is just advising her friend in the right way cuz you won't want your friend to enter a suspicious job just for money

I wont write any spoiler so I will try my best to describe it. The character's are very relatable and you could feel the bond between them. The pace of the story is steady but doesn't fail to make a twist. Really looking for the updates.

Writing is good, and fun to read. Two friends' conversation is well portrayed. Eager to know what will happen next. Keep up the excellent work.

The author has a really unique writing style, and in this case, it's not bad at all. The use of punctuation could be improved, but the story's still easy to read, and the use of detail's well done.

Wow. Such a nice read. The characters are relatable and I kinda like Emily and Nadia's relationship. Armando, well, Armando.... [img=recommend][img=recommend] Dear author, update more chapters.

the book is good, like a romance novel that one will read. the characters express themselves well, if there is anything I need to add then it will be the need to update more frequently... Good job, writing author...