I Help A NPC Become The Legendary Witch

I Help A NPC Become The Legendary Witch

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Author: White Critical
4.15
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When Liao Zixuan woke up, he learned that he had been transmigrated into the game, Fallen God. As he didn’t want to embarrass the Trasmigrator Army, he was ready to work hard to become a legendary boss.

However, things changed when the small girl was shocked by his sudden appearance. She studied Liao Zixuan for a while before warily reaching out her skinny hand to touch his head, not of a human but a wolf instead. Liao Zixuan did not get transmigrated as a human but became a Summoned Beast known as a Dark Flame Wolf. That was just a minor problem for him, who was known as the top sparring partner back in his world.

Many years had passed since then, and the game was introduced to a mysterious Night Empress that terrified the kingdoms. She also went by the name of Witch of Destruction, Holy Saintess of Elements, and Commander of the Abyss Fort. Outside of the game, she was seen by the players as a legendary character who was seen in every corner of the main storyline, a lady who was the dream of every male player.

What no one knew was that behind the Night Empress was Liao Zixuan, who tended his farm happily. He looked at the Night Empress, who used to be a small skinny girl, then at the giant cabbages on his farm and grinned.

Look! Both of these are the results of my hard work!

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Azocth
Azocth

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
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Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofu

25 chapter review. Honestly, much better than I expected. The mc transmigrated or reincarnated as a summoned beast and a random little girl named Vivian is his summoner. I like to say that he transmigrated in a virtual game similar to The Legendary Mechanic. The mc himself is a BOSS-rated monster so he is quite strong with high potential. The mc doesn't have a status panel but his summoner aka random NPC villager girl, Vivian does. As a NPC she can't see her status panel but MC can and he also can operate it. So, basically he can control the development of his summoner and himself through Vivian's panel. Translation Quality: 5* (It isn't MTL but you might see some weird words that looks like mistranslation but probably isn't. The translator didn't give context so it's lost translation instead. Meaning lost in translation) SoU: 5* (It's trial read) Story Development: 5* (Honestly, read it yourself, it has 25 chapters as I am writing this review) Character Design: 4* (Only Vivian has some unique personality, the rest of the characters are quite basic designs) World Background: 5* (Basically The Legendary Mechanic. But for those who don't know. It's basically a 100% realistic virtual world where the mc is transmigrated as a summoned beast of a NPC, due that he is a NPC he doesn't have a level limit and can become very strong. Because it's a game there will be major events leading to many changes in the world where the mc will take advantage of due his future knowledge of the game) Overall score: 4.8 Personal score: 4.5

3 years ago
15
ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaint

The summary made this story to look simple and makes you assume there might be Plot for this "Witch" maybe MC changed her fate. But then again I've read too many shoujos with Witch plots so I may be overestimating things. A male MC makes me want to read this!! Just no Harem please. Lol

3 years ago
15
princeVegeta
princeVegeta

anyone have raws..?…................................................... …................................................... …...................................................

3 years ago
9
RebirthOfAnOldHag
RebirthOfAnOldHag

+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1love story haven't seen much like it for a while

3 years ago
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NoobyLegion
NoobyLegion

Sounds interesting Anybody knows the raw? NoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNoNo

3 years ago
7
Nobleran
Nobleran

Ot was entertaining until chapter 40 that become Mtl. Just another scam

a year ago
6
Weiden306
Weiden306

For a Webnovel translation the quality of this story so far has shocked me with real story, world building, background, and character design that go past any other translation I’ve read so far

3 years ago
5
Cyrs
Cyrs

The plot is hurried, the mc just need 3 lines to accepted his transmigration and the change of species, for the others reviews I my expectation was apointed for the next TLM insted of this mediocrity,

3 years ago
2
Bob_lang
Bob_lang

Very interesting so far as long as it maintains the quality which I think it will do and even be better in the future since it sets up a lot of stuff that will pay off

3 years ago
2
TJ_Watkins
TJ_Watkins

Initial impression is that it reminds me of The Legendary Mechanic, only the reincarnated player is the summoned beast of an NPC instead of the NPC themselves. Hopefully this change means that there will be, comparatively, more character interaction and supported character growth instead of the MC being a lone wolf that everyone close to him is trying to catch up with and everyone on his level is trying to make use of him. I'm looking forward to seeing if it can live up to my expectations

3 years ago
2
Skirata
Skirata

I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read

a year ago
1
Lolat_4455
Lolat_4455

another mtl scam, dont bother. so sad what has become of this app

a year ago
1
Twigs
Twigs

A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5

3 years ago
1
SkeletonSama6969
SkeletonSama6969

I only read it till chapter 40 because it became boring................................................................. I read this is qidian...

3 years ago
1