Coincidence Factor
Author: TysonBoss
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In 2438, natural and synthesized advancements in genomic research culminated with a drastic mutational coincidence: the superpower organ. Enabling talented human possessors to perceive and thus cultivate dark matter, scientists analyzed its genetic sequence and makeup for mass replication and subsequent countrywide implementation. But after approximately two years, and 4+ billion people implanted, a terrible monster was detected...
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Man oh man, what an exceptionally well written first chapter. The writing just brings you into the world and gives you the feeling of being there. Really looking forward to where this can go and the scene and setting at the end was quite haunting. Cliffhanger-Kun really chose an inopportune moment to strike!
Love the writing skills ,love the interesting story good job Author.The story is really interesting great work indeed.cant stop commenting on the grammar.
Word choice is really a big deal for many new authors, though with this author everything is written precisely and relevantly. Even though there is a small amount of character dialogues, overall it was a good experience to read this one.
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Holy moly guacamole. I mean wow! This is incredible. I could not stop reading this fantabulous novel. The tone, the pace, the word choice, the character development, all outstanding. You cannot NOT read this book before dying. It's a must read and I will force everyone to read it!
So starting off, I loved the writing style. The variety of word choice is nice and keeps the sentences fresh. Though there are times where sentences drag on longer than they need to by being separated by so many commas. As for the rest of the story, I big issue I noticed was the world-building. The readers have no idea what world they're into as they isn't many environmental descriptions of the land in the beginning chapters. World building is important in the sense it helps the readers familiarize themselves with the world you're the characters are in. If it isn't established soon, readers will be lost not enough significant details have been noted about the world. And really, that's the only issue I had. That and the array of words I'm sure many multiple didn't know existed. It is important to include context clues in the writing so it doesn't just seem you're using big words just because it makes the passage better. And that's my thoughts, brush up on the world building and environmental descriptions! Explain more about the world and don't dump a bunch of info on the reader! Best of luck! :>
The strong point of this novel is in its attention to details. The author is quite proficient in formulating some intriguing descriptions. The weak point, if you mind, is that the number of chapters in still low on the count (as per writing this review) to have a more coherent development for the story as a whole. So here's to hoping for more uploads in the future. And please do give this novel a try..