TANG_YU_PING_Moe

"Where am I" 
She looked around and shouted at the top of her lungs.
"HELP"
"HELP"
A ball of light crashed into her body.
Then she felt suffocated and a screen appeared. 
[System parasite commencing]
She felt pain like never before.
[Parasite installing.......Succeeded]
[Gaining control of soul.......Succeeded]
She suddenly was in a black room and saw a screen.
She wanted to move but was stuck as if a mountain was pressing on her. 
A ball of light suddenly lit and the pressure subsided.
[System commencing extermination of soul]
Dread washed over her body as she saw a small child about the size of a six year old. She couldn't see through the veil of death as every step the child stepped, she felt closer to the valley of death. 
"Please have mercy on me"
"No" 
The child suddenly used her arm to cut the woman in half.
The women still alive tried to fight back by pouncing on the child but to no avail as the child cut both her arms. 
Feeling the grasp of death grabbing on her neck. She smirked and chuckled.
"Its time for your death"
"Oh reall-"
The woman blew up with unrelenting force. The power started to disintegrate the child.
"How"
The last words of the child.
The women smiled at the dying child as information flowed through her mind.
She fainted.
[System 'Law System' has died in a battle of existence]
[World System shall give inheritance to relative.......Error] 
[Law system shall be exiled so that soul shall not gain power.......Error]
[Partial Law system is being reabsorbed into world system.......Success]
[ERROR ERROR]
[Compensation is needed. Transmigration and unparalleled talent is given as compensation.] 
[World shall be about cultivation as high compensation is needed.]
[Unparalleled talent shall be given as title {Unsurpassable martial weapon master}]
[World system shall not allow this lowly being to have power so heavy restrictions shall be given]
[Lowly being cannot cultivate in anyway.]
[Lowly being shall lose everything.]
[Processing and implementing...... Success]
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"Where am I" A child with a voice of a hourse voice sounded.
The child covered her mouth and immediately tried to find something to reflect on as she used a puddle, a face of a child about 3 years old but she knew she was 5 and seemed like this from malnurisment. The most mouth opening thing is that she was ugly, she seemed comparable to a donkey. She was shocked but suddenly information resurfaced and she cursed at all the information she remembered. 
She looked up and cursed in low murmurs as she laid down on the cave floor and slept as she was exhausted from her mind and soul.

(Hi, author here, first time writing, so the farther we go the more story concepts I try to add in the story, leading to this pile of burning stupidity called 'I can change the core principle.' 

Strap on your big boy/girl pants as you get absolutely violated by my terrible writing so I sincerely advice you to be the M that you never knew you were. Strip down and get whipped.)

(On a serious note, this whole novel is just a draft for a larger novel so if you find people becoming concepts being too ridiculous. You know what to do...... Flame me in the comments with one star reviews.)

Alternative Synopsis
Have You thought about the profoundness of a concept? What is a concept? It's a idea. Are there any limits to an idea? Non but physical. Then, are there ways to bypass the physical boundaries of your limited imagination? Spiritually. 

This is a novel exploring the idea to live a concept that is intricately tied to infinity. 

Is a system Ai from all those popular books the manifestation of an AI or are they the sad byproduct? I don't know. 

What is a Law? A concept fully formed. An idea fleshed out for the world to see. So when a cultivator bends a Law, those it follow the past or the future or the present. After all, an idea is something out the bounds of time and space. A idea is discovered not created. It is already existing.

I can change the core principles

'Nah, it won't work so time for plan B.'


As she smirked a little from the thought of torturing the man.


'Heh, Tang Nuan you know what I don't like about you.'


As the naked man also known as Palu starts to wake up, she placed a knife on his neck as her intent pressured him like a mountain. 


'Its that your naive but I will attribute that to you being young so don't make this mistake again.'


He was dripping cold sweat behind his back as he was at the edge of pissing himself.


He looked at the small girl with fear. Though, from an outside view it seemed kinda comical. 


"Great lord, may I ask for forgiveness."


As he slowly moved his body, he kowtowed in front of the small girl.


The girl seeing him kowtow placed the knife on his neck.


Her face was smiling and the atmosphere was eerily quiet as the man asked a question doused in flattery and respect.


"Great lord, may this slave ask for the great almighty lords topic. This slave shall try his best to answer."


The man immediately spoke with humbleness. 


It took him a couple of hours to explain to her and she compiled it in the systems, note book app. 


"The girl pushed the knife a little into his skin making blood come out."


"Ye- Yes, thats all I have, please let me go great and almighty lord."


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