TANG_YU_PING_Moe

"Where am I" 
She looked around and shouted at the top of her lungs.
"HELP"
"HELP"
A ball of light crashed into her body.
Then she felt suffocated and a screen appeared. 
[System parasite commencing]
She felt pain like never before.
[Parasite installing.......Succeeded]
[Gaining control of soul.......Succeeded]
She suddenly was in a black room and saw a screen.
She wanted to move but was stuck as if a mountain was pressing on her. 
A ball of light suddenly lit and the pressure subsided.
[System commencing extermination of soul]
Dread washed over her body as she saw a small child about the size of a six year old. She couldn't see through the veil of death as every step the child stepped, she felt closer to the valley of death. 
"Please have mercy on me"
"No" 
The child suddenly used her arm to cut the woman in half.
The women still alive tried to fight back by pouncing on the child but to no avail as the child cut both her arms. 
Feeling the grasp of death grabbing on her neck. She smirked and chuckled.
"Its time for your death"
"Oh reall-"
The woman blew up with unrelenting force. The power started to disintegrate the child.
"How"
The last words of the child.
The women smiled at the dying child as information flowed through her mind.
She fainted.
[System 'Law System' has died in a battle of existence]
[World System shall give inheritance to relative.......Error] 
[Law system shall be exiled so that soul shall not gain power.......Error]
[Partial Law system is being reabsorbed into world system.......Success]
[ERROR ERROR]
[Compensation is needed. Transmigration and unparalleled talent is given as compensation.] 
[World shall be about cultivation as high compensation is needed.]
[Unparalleled talent shall be given as title {Unsurpassable martial weapon master}]
[World system shall not allow this lowly being to have power so heavy restrictions shall be given]
[Lowly being cannot cultivate in anyway.]
[Lowly being shall lose everything.]
[Processing and implementing...... Success]
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"Where am I" A child with a voice of a hourse voice sounded.
The child covered her mouth and immediately tried to find something to reflect on as she used a puddle, a face of a child about 3 years old but she knew she was 5 and seemed like this from malnurisment. The most mouth opening thing is that she was ugly, she seemed comparable to a donkey. She was shocked but suddenly information resurfaced and she cursed at all the information she remembered. 
She looked up and cursed in low murmurs as she laid down on the cave floor and slept as she was exhausted from her mind and soul.

(Hi, author here, first time writing, so the farther we go the more story concepts I try to add in the story, leading to this pile of burning stupidity called 'I can change the core principle.' 

Strap on your big boy/girl pants as you get absolutely violated by my terrible writing so I sincerely advice you to be the M that you never knew you were. Strip down and get whipped.)

(On a serious note, this whole novel is just a draft for a larger novel so if you find people becoming concepts being too ridiculous. You know what to do...... Flame me in the comments with one star reviews.)

Alternative Synopsis
Have You thought about the profoundness of a concept? What is a concept? It's a idea. Are there any limits to an idea? Non but physical. Then, are there ways to bypass the physical boundaries of your limited imagination? Spiritually. 

This is a novel exploring the idea to live a concept that is intricately tied to infinity. 

Is a system Ai from all those popular books the manifestation of an AI or are they the sad byproduct? I don't know. 

What is a Law? A concept fully formed. An idea fleshed out for the world to see. So when a cultivator bends a Law, those it follow the past or the future or the present. After all, an idea is something out the bounds of time and space. A idea is discovered not created. It is already existing.

I can change the core principles

Ai Lim and Tang Nuan stood up as they ran towards the lady in white while holding hands. The former was holding her spear on her right as the latter was holding a one-handed axe. 


As Ai Lim and Tang Nuan shot forward so does the lady. Ai Lim pierces her spear forward while being coated with her intent. The lady was unfazed as she ducks down and swings her sword upwards at blinding speeds.


As the sword inches towards her. Her intent seemed to change directions. She suddenly flew backwards and Tang Nuan was pushed forward as she swung her axe. Her momentum was like a bullet train as it inches closer to their enemy.


She in response put her sword on her left arm and cut it.


When the axe connected she seemingly disappeared to a distance in front of them. Surprised but keeping a calm image, Ai Lim compressed all of their intent on her throwing axe as her muscles and veins bulge on her left arm. Her face distorted from the pain as she thrown it hard.


The throwing axe was whistling forward as it distorts the domain.


Her right arm twisted itself and fell but she kept her wicked and happy smile. 


The axe was a meter from her as she kicked it upwards with no resistance. The axe flew high into the sky. A red hue covers it. As it stops and shoots towards the girls.


The girls were distraught as they were severely weakened but they pushed themselves to the limit. The intent in their body sensed this and gone overdrive. Their already pale and injured skin started to drop on the ground and frozen blood was gushing out of their orifices. 


The temperature surrounding them dropped low. As snowflakes started to condense and surround them. The girls gripped their hands together harder as they readied their weapons. The usually translucent hue intent turned dark blue. 


Through living in this cold ice world for years. They comprehended a small amount of ice intent from the eye of law. 


The hoarse sound of two people shouting echoed through the battlefield as their weapons clashed turning the battlefield into a frozen cold landscape. They looked forward at the lady with shining cold black eyes and locked on to the throwing axe. Reality itself was falling apart as space was distorting. 


The training reality was broken as the lady got serious. No longer playful, ready to kill and following her change in attitude the ice around her condensed making arms for her. 


While, reality was collapsing the axe disintegrated leaving a line of broken reality. 


The hole in reality increased as the girls looked at her running at them in full speed. Filled with panic. They jumped through the hole in reality. 


Knocking both of them out. The lady a few seconds later also jumped in to the portal with gritting teeth. 


Demon part 2