TANG_YU_PING_Moe

"Where am I" 
She looked around and shouted at the top of her lungs.
"HELP"
"HELP"
A ball of light crashed into her body.
Then she felt suffocated and a screen appeared. 
[System parasite commencing]
She felt pain like never before.
[Parasite installing.......Succeeded]
[Gaining control of soul.......Succeeded]
She suddenly was in a black room and saw a screen.
She wanted to move but was stuck as if a mountain was pressing on her. 
A ball of light suddenly lit and the pressure subsided.
[System commencing extermination of soul]
Dread washed over her body as she saw a small child about the size of a six year old. She couldn't see through the veil of death as every step the child stepped, she felt closer to the valley of death. 
"Please have mercy on me"
"No" 
The child suddenly used her arm to cut the woman in half.
The women still alive tried to fight back by pouncing on the child but to no avail as the child cut both her arms. 
Feeling the grasp of death grabbing on her neck. She smirked and chuckled.
"Its time for your death"
"Oh reall-"
The woman blew up with unrelenting force. The power started to disintegrate the child.
"How"
The last words of the child.
The women smiled at the dying child as information flowed through her mind.
She fainted.
[System 'Law System' has died in a battle of existence]
[World System shall give inheritance to relative.......Error] 
[Law system shall be exiled so that soul shall not gain power.......Error]
[Partial Law system is being reabsorbed into world system.......Success]
[ERROR ERROR]
[Compensation is needed. Transmigration and unparalleled talent is given as compensation.] 
[World shall be about cultivation as high compensation is needed.]
[Unparalleled talent shall be given as title {Unsurpassable martial weapon master}]
[World system shall not allow this lowly being to have power so heavy restrictions shall be given]
[Lowly being cannot cultivate in anyway.]
[Lowly being shall lose everything.]
[Processing and implementing...... Success]
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"Where am I" A child with a voice of a hourse voice sounded.
The child covered her mouth and immediately tried to find something to reflect on as she used a puddle, a face of a child about 3 years old but she knew she was 5 and seemed like this from malnurisment. The most mouth opening thing is that she was ugly, she seemed comparable to a donkey. She was shocked but suddenly information resurfaced and she cursed at all the information she remembered. 
She looked up and cursed in low murmurs as she laid down on the cave floor and slept as she was exhausted from her mind and soul.

(Hi, author here, first time writing, so the farther we go the more story concepts I try to add in the story, leading to this pile of burning stupidity called 'I can change the core principle.' 

Strap on your big boy/girl pants as you get absolutely violated by my terrible writing so I sincerely advice you to be the M that you never knew you were. Strip down and get whipped.)

(On a serious note, this whole novel is just a draft for a larger novel so if you find people becoming concepts being too ridiculous. You know what to do...... Flame me in the comments with one star reviews.)

Alternative Synopsis
Have You thought about the profoundness of a concept? What is a concept? It's a idea. Are there any limits to an idea? Non but physical. Then, are there ways to bypass the physical boundaries of your limited imagination? Spiritually. 

This is a novel exploring the idea to live a concept that is intricately tied to infinity. 

Is a system Ai from all those popular books the manifestation of an AI or are they the sad byproduct? I don't know. 

What is a Law? A concept fully formed. An idea fleshed out for the world to see. So when a cultivator bends a Law, those it follow the past or the future or the present. After all, an idea is something out the bounds of time and space. A idea is discovered not created. It is already existing.

I can change the core principles

He looks at them and contemplates. His hands were gripping hard on the knife. He started to circulate his spiritual energy inside his body. He looked at them with deep sympathy but was mostly directed to Ai Lim.


As Ai Lim wakes up, she tries to get up. She regretted it immediately as deep pain assaulted her. She tried to use her intent while holding Tang Nuan's hand but was left again with unbearable pain. She dropped back on the bed. Though she found out their intent capacity has increased, though it was minimal.


She felt that her mind was going insanely slow as it took her several minutes to think things through. Then she felt scared and frightened, her mind was blank. She looked around the room and saw shadows moving. Making monsters that were laughing at her.  Left with nothing but fear, she shook Tang Nuan very hard to try to wake her up. She looked around the room as if a young child saw a monster. Tears were threatening to fall.


"Wake up, Tang Nuan! Please I'm scared."


Fortunately, Tang Nuan started to open her her eyes and looked at Ai Lim stunned and in disbelief as the once confident and independent women was now red eyed and a meek temperament surrounding her. 


Tang Nuan immediately hugged her as she seemed to calm down. Tang Nuan used her connection deep within both of their consciousness. She looked at the side to the place holding Ai Lim's part of their spiritual mind. She went into the mind as she arrived in Ai Lim's mental world. 


She saw a devastating view, she saw a barren wasteland. Except one patch of land, it only had grass on the ground. She knew where that place was. It was Ai Lim's past life memories. It was empty. But whenever the barren land tried to spread in, it would be destroyed. 


It was a relief she didn't go outright insane or just went into a deep coma. Tang Nuan could only think of one conclusion. 


Tang Nuan freaked out and panicked. She looked around the room finding nothing of use, she tried to use her intent but suffered pain. She was aggrieved by the situation. The most she could do was comfort the now crying girl. 


Teacher