The Cultivation Tower System
In this world, two souls, are rebirth and remolded. One is a man from a world similar to ours, years into the future, a veteran of the Unifications Wars. Mold and birth by war, discharge from the military after a crippling wound. He spends the rest of his days playing games and making videos. After a tragic death, he finds himself, transported into this world. A new life and new goals.
The second soul, is a woman, an original native of this world. Living life under the boot of someone else, a slave with no free will, and suppressing emotions. Her bright future was stolen right from under her nose. After a fitting end of a slave, she is transported back to the past. Arm with revenge and knowledge, she will pay back blood for blood.
Two souls, with different goals, and lives, will come united. Equals under the Heavens, a walking god, and a breathing goddess. In the world of cultivation. The destiny of Death covers them. Their goal, to kill the World.
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For an ESL Novel, this book is very well written. The descriptions are nice, and the characters are fun. The only issues that I have with this book would mostly be with the grammar. Punctuation is not used correctly, and some scenes are described poorly, either through poor word choice or bizarre sentence structure. While both could be a product of not understanding the English language, a run through Grammarly or getting a beta reader or editor who speaks English would solve this problem,. The dialogue is quite clunky, but the same solution would apply. The world's lore is pretty good, and is explained better than some of the stuff I've seen in other novels. Ultimately, this is a pretty good book, that just needs some editing. 4/5
hidden gem 💎. . .
Good novel I like the background interesting characters a decent amount of grammar errors but still readable but author needs too update more 🥲🥲🥲
I like the general theme of this book, however it could use some grammatical revisions. I like how the characters were written, however they feel rather empty like empty husks. The narration choice is also a bit odd—from omniscient to limited third POV, along with the usage of present tense then suddenly past tense. Certain scenes could also be divulged more into, as it feels rather rushed sometimes. However, despite all that, I can see that this book has potential. Keep it up, author!