How a Cat Created the Strongest Guild

Writing Quality: The writing is really well done. The amount of exposition and dialogue are really well done and it gives you a great understanding of what is going on and how the setting of the world is. There are a few spots in later chapters that could use some additional editing as there are a few typos and one paragraph was missing the rest of a sentence. Updating Stability: The novel seems to be getting at least weekly updates and they seem to be consistent. As the novel is new and not following any rigorous schedule it is hard to properly gauge this setting. More chapters would definitely give more insight into this novel. Story Development: The plot is an interesting take on the VR MMO game system trope and the author has done a well job of explaining how the cat is able to play the game and is able to survive within the game. The progression is a nice and slow one allowing for plenty of info dumps and the immediate goal, making fluffles a guild master and taking over the world(s) is easily identifiable. Character Design: The characters are varied between the MC, Dartrix, Ashfire, and not sure if Doctor0 and Cynthes will remain or not, but they are all interesting in their own right, Doctor0 is my favorite character outta the bunch. Their acceptance of a cat playing the MMO is a little too forced in my opinion however. If this was me, I would be contacting the Help Desk and reporting Fluffles as who knows what everlasting effects a cat playing a VR MMO could be, let alone the owner and their reaction. Maybe this is planned for future exploration but as it stands everyone who joins Fluffles party/guild is just “meh she’s a cat,” or “must be a super serious RPer.” Would like to see this explored in more seriousness. World Background: As we have only, minutely explored two worlds, a werewolf/vampire world and a steampunk world, the amount of variation is lacking, however, this is due to the age of the novel itself. The author does an excellent job at preparing the readers as the MMO has the potential of countless various worlds, each offering substantial variation and they do an amazing job at describing the world around Fluffles and friends. All-in-all excellent novel with amazing potential. Fluffles is funny, as you would expect a cat playing a VR MMO to be, and the supporting cast does excellent at making the novel lighthearted.

Omg I love Fluffles!!! She is such a cute MC and she acts just as you would think a cat playing a game would! She’s so good at the game!! She’s also so bad at it!

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Awesome novel! Great story! Interesting premise and good execution! I can’t wait for more! Please author-sama!!! Give us moooorreeeee! I can’t wait so long!!!

So far so good. Personally not a fan of the ‘future’ style of writing, with the “would slash at their eyes”. But everyone has their own style, so it’s not a big deal for me. I look forward to future releases.

This is fun to read, I have to give you that. Although there's some double punctuations or small letters when they should be capitalized, the witty dialogues and MC's cat-like behavior throughout the story keep me going on. I love that you added glitch and lag, reminding me that they're just in a normal game. I wonder how many hours have passed since she started the game. And, what would happen if the MC's servant come in and shut off the game? Can she comeback and meet her friends again? Keep up the good work :D

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Judging from the premise alone, I think your story was inspired by another cat character from Sword Art Online Abridged, who coincidentally is also named Fluffles (but is male instead of female). But still, both cats are deadly, and so I look forwards to what happens next.

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