Quest 1: Bloopers

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During the draft of this part, I accidentally typed this:

On contact the tornado keeps picking them up, shrinking from the cold. "Grace, on your left!" Jack says. She turns around to see one of them humans there get hit by a ball of leaves and then changes.

First glance, nothing wrong. But then you read this:

see one of them humans there-

Is it just me or does this sound country?