Ragnarok:Struggling To Survive
With the greatest Prophet's last remaining breath he told us a great change will come the weak will perish the strong will survive don't run, don't hide, fight back and survive.
Then a few years later, his warning was right the world had changed as we know it.
every person had heard a voice in their head saying, that the wait is over as earthquakes soon appeared in every part of the world before sending them to a random place
Monsters appear that gave birth to living breathing calamities did I forget that they kill and eat humans? The world expanded and a few unknown races came to our planet, a leveling system that has a motive of helping the inhabitants
I'm Rei kirigaya. this is my story about the new world that transpired a mystery that I have no connections to, yet I travel to seek the truth. Traveling in this mysterious world that once was known as earth I climb every obstacle and face many difficulties. I wonder what awaits me in the end of it all
[Disclaimer, I don't own the cover]
It's my first written story I did made this a while ago but it didn't go well the story got stretched it didn't appeal to any readers before that's why after I learned from my mistakes in the past I tend to give a brief explanation while it doesn't take a whole chapter making it easier for my readers to catch up I hope you give my story a try and I intended to make the character weak I just figured out that starting pretty strong just makes it your typical main character on a fantasy story
My review might be my own opinion but I just wanna say that you're doing pretty great and I'm not seeing anything left unexplained I'll be waiting for more of your content
some grammar errors but I love the idea of first person present tense in the writing. it's definitely a harder way to write but I am excited to see where this story goes. the protag is interesting and the writing is very descriptive. love it.