Sarah was an average girl who had almost everything she had.
suddenly, something changed ,that affected her family, friends and even herself.
she set on a journey to find the answer to her questions
Will she find what she's looking for? or will her life never change?
The story arc is intriguing, it pulls in the reader. I also love the flow - so accommodating. This story should become a movie, it's relatable and natural, regardless of the loopholes and flaws pointed. The MC has great potential and I will look to see her grow in this story. I can tell the writer has started her journey and this is her first trialer story (if there's anything like that). Keep writing and growing. Thanks for sharing this with us.