Chapter 4 - The start of something new

Hello guys pls share my chat story and give me some commeton how can make my writing better because i know that my writing is not perfect so pls review.

Let's start the story

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Madara said " Take of her clothes just like i am going to do with mito "

mito and Yuki blushed while the latter felt shame and fear Mito felt happy since madara was gonna make her his women.

Hashirama and Tobirama were angry after seeing this and Hashirama shouted " Madara how dare you do that to yuki and Mito she is your sister " while tobirama was also angry

Madara smiled and said in provocative manner " What you are angry at the fact that i am doing what you could not you naive shit"

Hashirama"Yo-

Madara teleports infront of hashirama and slaps him breaking some of his teeth"Shut up, I am not in the mood to hear your bullshit as a matter of fact if you talk one more time then i am going to cut your brother's tongue off"

Hashirama wanted to yell but stayed quiet because of what he heard while tobirama looked at madara with anger.

Madara looks toward tobirama and sees him looking at him with anger he slaps him and asks the fuck you looking at old fuck.

Tobirama" You bast-

tobirama couldn't finish what he wanted to say because madara punched him two times in the face breaking his nose and teeth.

Madara"Shut up trash now look how i fuck your love interest and your brother's love interest"

Sorry guys and girls I was busy with increasing my knowledge and now i am back i promise the quality of this work is gonna increase.