Alexander was a normal teenager when he was snatched from his normal life and teleported to a cultivation world, and this is his journey to becoming a god level entity in that world.
Decent story, but you make a lot of punctuational mistakes, which is emphasised by your lack of sentence forms - you mainly use complex sentence forms where a short sentence would be much more effective. Your description of characters/setting could be improved as well.
Decent story, but you make a lot of punctuational mistakes, which is emphasised by your lack of sentence forms - you mainly use complex sentence forms where a short sentence would be much more effective. Your description of characters/setting could be improved as well.