I'm hungry, let's all grab a hamburger and some coke and eat. hestia is best goddess and if you don't agree then you fall to heresy and deserve stubbing your toe.
2 years ago
15
Troglodyte_08
So far seems really good. I agree Hestia is a great goddess. I like the writing style and plot so far. I think you could do a little more background information about characters. I understand that you have a personal life but if you try and write whenever you can (say 30 minutes before sleeping or at lunch.) and stockpile chapters and release one every couple of days or so, thatwould be good to keep people interested in the story and not just be like "This hasn't been updated in a while, did the author drop it?" or "The author hasn't updated in a while and I have better things to read." just stuff like that. Overall great book so far, hope you keep up the good work and update soon! I definitely reccomend reading!
2 years ago
3
EternalSolitude
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2 years ago
2
Kirito_Kirigaia
I have enjoyed the percy jackson fan fictions because finding good ones is rare and this one is beyond good it's up there with my legendary tier fanfics
2 years ago
1
Naruto_Tiny
Good!
a year ago
0
Numera
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I'm hungry, let's all grab a hamburger and some coke and eat. hestia is best goddess and if you don't agree then you fall to heresy and deserve stubbing your toe.
So far seems really good. I agree Hestia is a great goddess. I like the writing style and plot so far. I think you could do a little more background information about characters. I understand that you have a personal life but if you try and write whenever you can (say 30 minutes before sleeping or at lunch.) and stockpile chapters and release one every couple of days or so, thatwould be good to keep people interested in the story and not just be like "This hasn't been updated in a while, did the author drop it?" or "The author hasn't updated in a while and I have better things to read." just stuff like that. Overall great book so far, hope you keep up the good work and update soon! I definitely reccomend reading!
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I have enjoyed the percy jackson fan fictions because finding good ones is rare and this one is beyond good it's up there with my legendary tier fanfics
Good!
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