Imagine a new Professor just came into the most prestigious high school in the west. North Rayleigh Academy. When the professor's side-job is a world-renowned arms dealer for private armies. What challenges will they face? Will conflict of interest be the reason? External forces taking control over everything? Or will it be war bigger than what students face.
Will the lessons of chemistry be helpful to the students? Is there something bigger running the entire school or is there an industry developing from the school itself? Vaughn is a man of many talents, skills, and ideals. Business comes first for him but that will change once he takes a step into his class changing his beliefs that runs his everyday life.
"Give an artist an inspiration... they'll make art. Give a student hope.... they'll thrive and be the best they can be. Give an army a stockpile of weapons... they'll create nothing but piles of bodies and mayhem along their path. I wonder sometimes if my students are actually listening to my lessons. I sure do hope they get more excited over science."
-Professor Vaughn Killford.
Author here, it's been nice writing this series for a while now and I want to know what you guys think of the current state of the book and or general thoughts of it. Any feedback is appreciated
Imma be honest the slaps. The story is well built and brings a new trope. Definitely recommend it’s a really good story! Keep up the good work author!
The strength of this story is the unique premise, and the compelling mc. When I read about him, I was curious about how his character would develop. One thing that bothers me is the constant wall text. I think it will tire the reader. And it's best if each character dialog uses a new paragraph. Suddenly in one paragraph another character spoke. It's confusing sometimes. Cheers!
The whole concept is great and all, but I think you should focus more on improving your delivery and how you construct your sentences. Make sure to use proper punctuations. Some of the words are redundant, so make sure to not do any of that in the future. Good luck!!!