Amazing story but there is room for lot improvement like you should first show the origin takings like a movie is a good plan but i thing you should pit it up from the beginning and if you reading this guess me who i am in IRL
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its good i was carving for some zombie stuff and i suggest main character ahould be named James and jhon char should've been vashon please
Amazing story but there is room for lot improvement like you should first show the origin takings like a movie is a good plan but i thing you should pit it up from the beginning and if you reading this guess me who i am in IRL
its good i was carving for some zombie stuff and i suggest main character ahould be named James and jhon char should've been vashon please
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