Turned By Doctor Vampire
Can a vampire be a Doctor? Can any of us even imagine a scenario like that?
Lilly's happy life went into turmoil when she found out that she has turned into a blood sucking vampire.
One night, she found herself in great pain and the next moment when she opened her eyes, she had turned into a vampire, with no memories of how she became one. She had memories of her past and her life but she lost memories for the last week.
Slowly she realised that turning a vampire was a blessing in disguise. . Being a smart girl, she quickly accepted her reality and tried her best to overcome it. While getting used to her new life, she found out that the man who helped her was a doctor and that he was ready to help her. While spending some time, Lilly realised that something was off about him but she never said anything as she was also hiding a huge secret from him which could destroy their lives.
But what would happen when she would get to know that the more she was trying, the more of her dark past was getting revealed? What is the secret she is hiding? What about the life she had led till now and what happened to her family?
Exactly what could be dark in the past of a young girl, whose happy life suddenly turned into tragic? What is off about him? Does he also has a secret? If yes, then what is it? Can there love be possible even after their secrets are revealed?
Read more to find the answers to all your questions.
"What? You mean that you never loved me. Not even once? ", Lilly said with tears in her eyes.
She could she that his eyes are also filled with tears but his face remains unreadable.
" No. Not even once. ", he replied with an unreadable expression and teary eyes.
" So, you just wanted me to get in your trap and use me because of my past? "
"Yes", he replied.
" But why? I thought we loved each other. Didn't you love me? "
"I just needed you. I used you for my purpose because you were the one I could make use of." and then he took out a sword.
Was her love a lie too? What exactly happened between them? Was she betrayed or..... is there something else?
Read to find out the answers of these questions.
Though, the book has few chapters, the story is very interesting. I instantly got hooked by the first chapter and could not stop myself from reading. Loved the story.
The beginning of this story is so mysterious that it got me hooked up. The first chapter is really eye catching. You are a pro, I hope to learn from you. I am definitely adding this to my library. Wow ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👏👏
A very fun read. I don't usually read vampire novels apart from Anne Rice but this one is pretty enjoyable. The start was intense and the conversations flow very well.
I love your story title. The start of your story is great. I love your writing style. however, the plot of your story is strong. characters are well arranged.
The title of your story is interesting. the book cover is good. The pot of your story is really marvellous no doubt the characters are well arranged. keep it up.
Overall a great for fans of this genre! Writing Quality 4/5: I was a bit distracted by the spacing between the dialogue and the double punctuation. Everything else was a 5/5! I could really get a feel for the characters through their dialogues, and the story had a nice pacing throughout. Even though I knew the premise of the story through the synopsis, it was enjoyable watching it h fold.
Another supernatural novel that caught my attention. It only got a few chapters but it is very interesting right from the first chapter. Good luck on the wsa dear.
The novel is written in a wonderful fashion with beautiful portration of characters and the scenes. I would like to say that I found some typos here and there, if the novel’s chapters can go through some proof-reading, that would be good! Anyways, Well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]
The story has an optimum pace for the readers to digest and understand things easily without any hurdle.As far as the last chapter is concerned,the potrayal of emotions is good and relatable,look out for minor grammatical errors in some words like "what is you doing?' ...otherwise it's perfect
A great story with a fresh and original idea. The Story wasn't to fast paced and the information that was given to me could be digested comfortable. Can't wait for future chapters from this author.
I won't do a false review here....You will improve as you write more chapters......well everyone does so but your story progressed a little fast for the first chapter and normal after that and it was good as fast paced chapters keep you more hooked.......currently on chapter 3.........well just a personal request but please write long chapters like around 1500-2000 words atleast as sometime leaving a cliffhanger makes the OP loose interest but i personally liked the stories as it is unique but even if you turn it into cliche it will be good........as cliche is imp for life
This is a good story, it's too early in to say too much, but the character's design and grammar are good along with the story development so far, I wish the author good luck and keep on writing.
I don't normally read romance wn's so take everything I say with a grain of salt. First off, I don't notice any blaring grammar mistake. What I did notice was the first few chapters are heavy on the dialog. Personally, I feel it would have gone a long way to add more of lily's thought process and little more emotion. Without it I got the vibe lily was a little to comfortable waking up in a strange place without her memories. All that said, the flow was great and I'm interested to see where this goes.
The start was a great read a mystery, an encounter of a character that I suspect will arrive later in the story it sounds interesting I can only wait for how the story unfolds as it continues
A gem found. Met by fate, Curiosity follows the sparks of feelings. Life is short to experience everything so I blankly read the fantasies and live another million year.