System Of Order
'Exchange the sacred flower with the highest rank weapon usable to me right now.’
[100 year old sacred flower * L85A2 assault rifle]
With all information related to the gun transmitting in his brain, the young man running at high speed while performing inhumane maneuvers, without stopping, twisted his arm which held the newly acquired weapon to aim behind him and shot 3 times at three different spots in the darkness.
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An heir of the Royal family of the demonic empire, while training in the wild, awakened the System Of Order. Granting him the ability to exchange any item for another of equivalent value, the young man was more wary than excited about the discovery.
When tension between the human and the demon race reached an all-time high, it abruptly diffused before the two races declared an alliance.
The question was, who could be capable enough to threaten the two hegemonic races so much that it forced them into alliance? The System Of Order awakening into MC. Could it be just a simple coincidence?
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"This treasure is useless, not a problem though, I have the system"
[Pendant of the Snow Queen * Crimson dagger of the Night emperor]
"I have no use for this anymore, let's see if I get something useful out of this."
[Rank four dagger * 256 MP camera]
"Shit, gotta run, I need something for the current situation."
[Rank seven halberd * Tower of suppression]
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I will try my best to make the Main Character smart. The MC will be an anti-hero but NOT villainous, please know the difference. He will be unprincipled, not bound by the rules. The MC will mostly act alone but he WILL have people he can trust and fall back to. At times he might also need to act with them. It won’t be MC single-handedly being the main role, people won’t get weaker after becoming his allies, so they WILL play a role. There will be a complex plot, so plot lovers, where ya at?
Come join me on this journey to write a novel based on a well thought out plot, where rather than just indomitable will or talent making MC unique, a myriad of different things like, his point of view of the world, his accumulating experiences leading to different decisions and changing personality, his losses actually discouraging him before jumping back up, makes him unique.
Release rate will be 10-14 chapters (unless mentioned otherwise in chapter comments).
I will make a discord server if enough readers demand about it.
Do read the first few chapters before moving ahead :)
Hello readers! it's your author here, I would like to mention a few things which I didn't put in the synopsis as well as shamelessly rate myself, so here we go, 1. It will take time for the story to pick up pace. To make it interesting from the get go, I have written some things which should've come later so yea, to catch up and build the foundation, the story will have a slow starting pace. 2. I will work on improving my writing, you can be guaranteed my later chapters will be better than the starting ones. 3. You'll find little to no grammatical errors, those that were missed by me will likely not be anything significant but I will appreciate if you comment about it so I can fix it for a better reading experience. Thank you for your patience!
Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them, but when the world needed him most, he vanished. Luckily— What Lucky?! Oh, I remember now. Luckily you found this story! Reading the initial chapters of the book, I would like to say that the book has a commendable grammar. The chapters were well written that I honestly felt it was a refreshing read. The fighting scenes were on the spot without over descriptions making it enjoyable and easier to understand. The emotions portrayed by the characters were on point as well and not overly dramatic to the point that it would exaggerate the whole situation. If you're still in doubt about this book, then the only advice I could give you is to personally try it out. I would promise you that your time will be worth it with this journey. Kudos to the author for making such a masterpiece. Good luck and may this book succeed.
It's Good................................................👍👍👍 Author's Writing in Battle Scene is Top Notch........👌👌 I hope its continue........... World Building is Nicely Done Without Any Major Info Dump.........😁 I hope you continue this novel.....🤞
Exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 5 and I shall be your benefactor. So I pray that you hit that like button and give me my exp. Exp Amen
Let me begin with what I like. The fight choreography is remarkable. It's not everyday I run into a novel with such clarity in the fights. Fights are inherently difficult to write in novels, but the author has really nailed how to wrote detailed and sophisticated fights, while still making it easy and exciting to read. I think you have a solid grasp on language. I don't see many grammatical mistakes, or super awkward phrasing. You've demonstrated pretty good vocabulary. And that already puts you far above most webnovel authors, imo. A grammatically clean novel is pleasant. Another thing I like about your novel is the concept, I think it has a lot of potential, the System seems more interesting than most I've run into, Clarence seems like an interesting lad even at the stage I am in. I guess one thing I personally think could use a little improvement is exposition. I'd suggest engaging in a little exposition before you introduce concepts, especially if the MC knows all about concepts you're about to introduce. Things like beast ranks, mana, the politics amd economics of the world. It feels a little confusing otherwise. All in all, I'd give this novel almost 5 stars. Great, but still has some areas of improvement.
Here to give a review for the earlier chaps! First thing I would like to point out is that the writing quality is really good! The author has a neat writing style and the descriptions are very well-done. Now, I'm not so sure about stability of updates. As for story development, it's slow burn but never fear! The pacing is steady and allows you breathing room to take in all the information, not dumping it to you all at once. The character is likable and what ho! Rare supportive parents--- And they're even demonic! I'm curious on how the system will now affect this character's life because he is a fantasy character since the start. He is not aware of how systems work, which is a pretty fresh concept. The overall premise in the synopsis is interesting too. Goodluck author, and everyone go give it a read!
Not exactly my taste but I don't regret reading it. It's a good novel and I would definitely recommend it to others why is there a word quota for reviews?
Alright here we go. The author gives a good impressionable first chapter with the introduction of the fight scene. The action words and battle skills portrayed presents a simple yet smart visual of an action scene. The names used are interesting and unique, I quite like them a lot. the story itself flows naturally without rush or lag which makes it enjoyable. Definitely a read you should pick up.Wishing the author the very best!
Omg I absolutely love this book,I love the characters, the grammar, the plot is amazing too,I had to read all 36 chapters because I didn't want to leave myself hanging and now yes I'm still left hanging because I wanna read more 😭 Hey readers you should definitely try this book and trust you will enjoy reading it as much as I did. This book is highly recommended!!!!
if one likes action, that person would like this action-packed and neatly written novel. need more context and more chapters! everything is good.
Amazing story, and for me the main highlight of the story was its grammar. I don't usually see a book with grammar this good. The story takes a slow start but that isn't a problem for me since I'm used to stories which are a slow burn. I personally liked the fight scenes of this novels more than some of the popular novels. The only thing which I want to say is that the world building needs a bit of more work. I'm doing this review after reading till chapter 10 so maybe the world building is improved in the rest of the chapters. Overall a good story 👍
Good grammar , good update stability but the world building can be better . Pros : 1) Impeccable grammar 2) Beautifully written fight scenes cons : 1) Little information about the world as of chapter 24