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Honestly, this is the first time I write a proper review on this site, for me this is a good yuri fic with many rich dialogues and not like all other fics in which too many visualize the situation than dialogue for the word count. MC is natural and confident, not anti-socialist and insecure like the majority MC on this web. The only lack for me in this book is harem and chapter. Well except for that this book is a masterpiece.

Warnings: Genderbend. Red flag: Telling people they're from the fictional world. Spanish Review. En lo personal la situación de ser tirado en un mundo diferente es una que debe tomarse con precaución, el hecho de que hayas leído sobre eso o visto la historia no quiere decir que conozcas a los personajes ni que te vayan a ayudar porque sí. Menos en un mundo incompleto y lleno de hoyos como lo es Remnant. Despues de ver una gran cantidad de FF a lo largo de los años, he llegado a ver ciertas cosas situaciones donde se debe dar un drop instantaneo y lamentablemente ocurrio aquí una de esas.

Author sama, I'll be honest with you. This story have a good potential. I mean a really good potential. Please don't stop writing and keep up the good work. Oh one more thing before I end my review, please don't do anything stupid with this story. That's all for me, and thank you for this amazing story Author sama.

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The history is good but there is something inside it that almost destroys it entirely, it's a feeling of irrelevance and unrealism. The relationships are too shallow, yes the author tries to make them realistic and make it so they have a logical progression but he's not really good at it, it's not bad but it's not even close to good either. For the fights and the drama, it doesn't work for the simple fact the author doesn't make it seem like the Mc will ever lose, in a good history for example every battle is a question of who is going to win but in this fic, the feeling that the Mc is always going to succeed the whole time. And the reincarnators? well the author could have done something amazing with them he just made the main enemies (Reincarnators) seem like imbeciles like they are not something to worry about. He did it so much that the foreshadowing of the final boss became irrelevant, the Mc is going to win and not lose anything why bother paying attention. The author gave his opinion on SI's through the MC and his writing was affected by it but honestly, in doing that he almost destroyed the entire fic. The main enemies could have been cautions, the Mc could not have the system say where they are located so the history could have had a taste of mystery both to the MC and us readers. Each fight against a reincarnator could have been something hard, the Mc could lose, maybe the fight or maybe something related to her, it would have introduced a good character development, and a good training montage/arc instead none of this happened. Anyway, in my honest opinion, this is an above-average fic but it could have been much, much better. 3.4 Stars

I’m really bad a giving reviews but I’ll try. From what I’ve read so far I’m really enjoying not only the story but the comedy and great yuri as well, I mean the yuri has been done very well so far, it hasn’t skipped straight to making out and s*x within a week of knowing each other like so many other stories and although it is a harem, which I’m not the biggest fan of, I can put up with it as long as it’s not too big.

Yuri is Wholesome Yuri is Pure Yuri Cures Yuri is Love Yuri is Good to the Soul Yuri gets my 5 Stars

I love how you just took a character of the storie and not just delete the original like every other one and that there a goal for the system not just like be The Strongest or collect this girl.

Only 4 chappy in but I see so much potential and the grammar and writings good so far. Plot wise, it will be a while before I can judge but so far it’s intriguing. Excited to see more chapter soon.

I honestly really liked this starting out but it feels like it is starting to crash and burn at least in the ways I originally enjoyed it.

Very nice!

Not much to say, so far really good. It IS a must try at least

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