The Flash: Eyon Of The Speed Force

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Author: The_Young_Flash
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Summoned to protect The Omniverse Equation, Axxel knew he was in over his head, but he just couldn't resist when a beautiful girl like Zatanna was the one asking him to get the job done.

What happened next... well, that's where the story of Eyon - The God of The Speed Force - began!

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The grammar is great. It's too early to comment on the world-building. I really like the fact that although the Mc is somewhat powerful, he's not written in a boring way whereby he powers his way through any problem which can be great. Don't get me wrong, but after a while, it becomes boring. The Mc uses both his brains and powers to survive. A technique few fan fic authors seem to capture. Btw I do see your sense of humor which I think adds a nice touch to the story (I enjoy your jokes). I'm really interested to see where your story goes.

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